题目内容
18.假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下面划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处)不计分.
I'm Cindy,a student for electronic engineering.To tell to you the truth,it wasn't my choice-it was my parents.I wanted to study psychology and they said I wouldn't get the good job.I wish I will not have accepted by the school to do engineering.I'm sitting in the library now and I ought to be doing some physics problem but instead I'm reading Erich Fromm's Escape from Freedom.I think my parents should read this as good,so they would understand us better.
分析 本文主要讲述作者是一名电子工程的学生,这是作者父母选择的专业.本来作者是要学习心理学的,但作者父母认为这不好找工作,只好屈从父母了.
解答 I'm Cindy,a student for electronic engineering.To tell to you the truth,it wasn't my choice-it was my parents.I wanted to study psychology and they said I wouldn't get the good job.I wish I will not have∧accepted by the school to do engineering.I'm sitting in the library now and I ought to be doing some physics problem but instead I'm reading Erich Fromm's Escape from Freedom.I think my parents should read this as good,so they would understand us better.
详解:
1.for改为of 考查介词.of意为"[表示所属关系]属于…的".
2.去掉to 考查固定搭配.to tell the truth意为"说实话",是固定搭配.
3.parents改为parents'考查名词所有格.根据句意:这是我父母的选择,parents'相当于my parents'choice.
4.and改为but 考查连词.前后两个分句之间是转折关系而非并列关系,用连词but.
5.the改为a 考查冠词.job是可数名词,单数形式前加不定冠词a表示泛指.
6.will改为would 考查虚拟语气.wish后接宾语从句时要用虚拟语气,表示与将来事实相反时用would.
7.加been 考查动词语态.I与accept之间是动宾关系,用被动语态.
8.problem改为problems 考查名词复数.problem是可数名词,其前有some修饰时要用复数形式.
9.good改为well 考查副词.read是动词,要用副词修饰.
10.us改为me 考查代词.全文用第一人称来讲述,此处应是代词me.
点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文,短文故事,书信等,具有很强的实用性.短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际,从表面上看类似一篇学生习作.首先,通读全文,了解短文大意,把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑,在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好,再进行逐句改错.其次,要进行逐个句子的改错.这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意.最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍,检查答案是否正确,感觉是否还有不妥之处,最终形成定稿.
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