假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误.每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧) ,并在其下面写出该加的词.删除:把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉.修改:在错的词下划一横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的词.注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧) ,并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只充许修改10处，多者(从第11处起) 不计分。

John has been lived next door to me for years and has left a real impression on me. Disabled as he is,but he is really a man who is full of positive energy. John always appreciates life and inspires me to be a best that I can be. He uses his mind to learn daily and had independence despite our unfavorable situation. Every time I with him,I feel as if the impossible can be achieved if I just believe on myself. John loves life and doesn’t spend any time feel sorry for himself. I am lucky to have so good a neighbor which can pick me up and inspire me when I am in lower spirits.

1. . .. has been lived... lived →living或去掉been

2. …but he is really... 去掉 but

3. . .. to be a best … a→the

4. . .. and had independence ... had→ has

5. . .. our unfavorable situation, our→his

6. Every time I with ... I 后加 am

7. . .. believe on myself. on→in

8. . .. spend any time feel... feel→feeling

9. …which can pick... which →who / that

10. . .. in lower spirits. lower→low

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Karla L. Miller writes a Washington Post advice column（专栏） on finding your way around the modern workplace. Each week she will answer one or two questions from readers.

Question: I'm Sam. I work part-time,paid hourly. There are only two employees: me and my boss. I receive no paid holidays or sick time,no health insurance,and orie week's paid vacation. For me,this job is just a job,and the salary I earn doesn't guarantee a 24/7 on-call mentality.

From almost the beginning,my boss has freely called me at home,called my personal cellphone,and emailed my personal account during my off-hours and vacation.

Five years later,it's still happening despite my having politely asked her several times not to contact me during my non-working hours.

Each time I ask,she apologizes and stops for a while,but always goes back to the behavior. I never take her phone calls on my cell,but she hasn't got my point.

The point is,it is never anything that can't wait until the next business day!I am ready to lose it.

Answer: If it won't cost you your job,call block and email filters(过滤器） are one easy path to inner peace.

It puzzles me that your boss seems to agree she's out of bounds,but then continues to contact you.

Either she occasionally gets enough response from you to make it worth trying,or she can't help firing off questions on impulse(—时冲动) .

You could ask her,once and for all,whether she's OK with waiting for .responses.— in which case her afler-hours calls and emails will be answered the next business day 一 or whether she wants instant answers 一 in which case,you will be tracking the time you spend responding so you can be paid for it.

11. What,s Sam's problem?

A. His salary is too low.

B. His job is very challenging.

C. His working hours are too long.

D. His boss always contacts him during off-duty time.

12. Which word can best describe Sam's feeling when he was writing the letter?

A. Upset. B. Disappointed.

C. Calm. D. Excited.

13. What does the underlined part “she's out of bounds” in the text probably mean?

A. What she's doing is acceptable.

B. What she's doing is hard to explain.

C. She's doing what she is not supposed to do.

D. She has the right to do whatever she wants.

14. Karla L. Miller advises Sam to .

A. give up his current job

B. keep silent about the matter

C. turn off his cellphone during his off-hours

D. talk about the matter with his boss seriously

Once,in a lovely garden,lived the most beautiful butterfly in the world. She was so pretty,and had won so many beauty contests 1.she became very proud. One day,a cockroach(蟑螂)got fed up with her showing off,and decided 2. (teach) her a lesson.

She went to see the butterfly,and in front of everyone she 3. (say) that the butterfly unfairly won those 4. (compete) and that in fact the cockroach was more beautiful.

The butterfly was angry and said to the cockroach, “I 5. (beat) you in a beauty contest,with whichever judge you choose.”

“OK,I accept. See you on Saturday,” answered the cockroach,and left 6. waiting for a reply.

That Saturday everyone went to the beauty contest. The butterfly arrived 7. (complete) confident of victory until she saw 8. the judges were: cockroaches,worms,beetles. All of them preferred the ugliness and bad smell of the cockroach.

The butterfly was left 9. (cry) and disappointed,wanting never to enter another beauty contest in her life. Fortunately,the cockroach forgave the butterfly for her pride and 10. became friends.

Mother: Hi,honey. Do you have anything exciting 1 . (report) today?

Mary: The big news is that George won. He actually 2. (come) in first in the spelling bee today.

Mother: Well,that's quite 3. achievement,and he should be proud 4. himself.

So,what was the winning word?

Miary: Mayonnaise(蛋黄酱) .Can you believe it? I guess it's a lot 5. (hard) to spell than you think.

Mother: M-A-Y-O-N …Is it one “n” or two?

Mary: See what I mean?

Mother: You know,I can remember when George’s parents and his teachers were really 6. (worry) about his spelling.That was just a couple of years ago. He sure has come a long way. So what happens next?

Mary: There is a play-off against the 7.(win) from Central High next week,and then the districts,and after that the state. Who knows,maybe we 8. (be) neighbours to the next national champ.

Mother: Maybe. 9. (speak) of mayonnaise,could you get me the jar from the fridge?

Mary: Only if you can spell it 10. (correct) .

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧) ,并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只充许修改10处，多者(从第11处起) 不计分。

As we all know it,a hero is someone who have courage and is not afraid to help out. There are many hero in our society such as police officers and firefighters. My hero is my grandfather,which is hardworking,smart,inspired and full of energy. He retires from a company two months ago and now works as editor in a newspaper office. He still works hardly in his old age. My grandfather doesn’t give up easily. He often says, “I will do that I can to contribute to my family and society." In my opinion,our grandfather is really a man whom I should learn from.

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧) ,并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只充许修改10处，多者(从第11处起) 不计分。

I strong recommend that physical activities in children are encouraged. Parents who are supposed to make sure that their children get some form of exercise one hour daily because exercise is better for character building. When this comes to exercise,many people end up picturing heavy exercise at the gym. As matter of fact,exercise for children can mean going out and having funs. For example,they can walk or cycle to nearby places instead of take a bus. They can take their dogs out for 15-minute walks twice a day.Beside,children should be encouraged to make new friends for whom they can actively play sports.

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧) ,并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只充许修改10处，多者(从第11处起) 不计分。

I was cleaned the other day when I came across a VCD player. I cleaned it and then just couldn’t stop staring it. I wondered ,“How is it possible that nothing that seemed so modern over ten years ago now seems so ancient?” It looked like something from a differently age. We are now very used to the Internet that it's more easy to forget how things used to be. However,a look at the history of science show a long list of once great invention that soon became out of date. We are living in a age when everything can be done on computers. That we will still be using the computer twenty years later is open to question.

For more than 10 years,the “SAS Survival Guide,” a book about outdoor tips by John “Lofty” Wiseman,has been a necessity in my camping backpack. The 400-page handbook usually comes with me on camping trips and has helped me search for food or use the sun and stars to find my way. But whenever I fly,I leave the book behind. However,what would happen if my plane crashed on a deserted island? Could I possibly create shelter from whale bones without this guide?

But no fear: the “SAS Survival Guide” comes in an app(应用程序) and it's every bit as terrific as the book.

The user-friendly app includes guidelines from the book,and then some. There are tips for building a fire,treating a snake bite and searching for mushrooms. The first aid guide includes instructions for saving yourself if you are choking. And there are warnings: If you happen to kill a polar bear,Wiseman warns,do not eat the liver(内脏) ，because it contains deadly amounts of vitamin A.

Sixteen videos show Wiseman teaching survival techniques,including one in which he kills a chicken. aSave the feathers. They can be useful for insulating (绝缘) clothing ,” he advises. But don't worry,no chickens were harmed in the testing of this app.

In other videos,Wiseman shows how to build shelter from plants with feathery green leaves,how to obtain drinkable water with a bag and how to construct a house from blocks of hard snow or ice.

There is room for improvement. Step-by-step videos would be more helpful than a series of pictures showing varipus knot (结) types. And the search function is complicated. On a recent camping trip,I ran across a black bear. Backing away,I searched the app for “bear,” which gave me more than 50 hits,including “bearings." Worried the bear would attack me as I looked through the results,I instead made a wide arc (弧) around her along the bank of a river. Fortunately,this was the right course,I later learned.

Still,it's a helpfiil app. If only Wiseman had tips on keeping a cellphone's battery life in the wilderness.

28. The author feels the book “SAS Survival Guide” is.

A. out-of-date B. very helpful

C. easy to carry D. too thick to read

29. According to John “Lofty” Wiseman,if you are eating a polar bear,you .

A. should avoid eating its liver

B. can take in enough vitamin A

C. should be careful not to choke

D. can save its fur to make clothes

30. The videos on the “SAS Survival Guide” app.

A. are all about outdoor tips from the book

B. show how to make various knots clearly

C. teach people how to live in the wild

D. are shot by John “Lofty” Wiseman

31. The author shows one of the app’s weaknesses.

A. by example B. by process

C. by comparison D. by classification

All Change!The charity role-reversal(角色互换) game

So, what's it all about?

All Change!is a fantastic,fun-filled,fancy dress festival that will help us to raise money for children in need.

When did it get going?

The first All Change!role-reversal entertainment took place in 2005 in aid of a local children's charity. Every year since then nearly 100,000 men,women and children have worn the strangest and the most wonderful headgear(头饰) possible to raise money for a growing number of children's charities. This year we are helping a record number of good causes,all aimed to help children in need.

Want to take part?

Great!We want 100,000 or more people like you to bring a smile to the face of local children. To find out more contact us on our website or phone 502 389 711. And remember,for the sake of children ...

Still want to take part?

OK!Here's what you have to do. On Friday 15 June,go to work,or to school,or shopping or whatever you normally do,dressed as normal,BUT on your head you must wear the strangest,most unbelievable headgear you can possibly find!Are you a policeman but would really love to be a chef? Are you a secretary with secret desires to be a Hollywood princess? Or a baker who wants to wear the world's largest wig(假发) ？Now is your chance!Be creative!

IT,S TIME FOR A CHANGE On Friday 15 June

It's ALL CHANGE DAY!!

21. What's the aim of the role-reversal game?

A. To amuse kids. B. To raise money.

C. To help sick kids. D. To change the world.

22. According to the text,All Change!is a festival that .

A. is held around the world

B. involves mainly the young

C. has a history of about ten years

D. falls on different dates each year

23. What are you expected to do on 15 June?

A. Try your dream job. B. Dress up as children.

C. Skip work or school. D. Wear creative hats.

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