题目内容
最近一位教师的十字辞职信引起了人们的热议:"The world is so big. I wanna have a look.(世界这么大,我想去看看)"。就此请你写一篇文章谈谈旅游的好处。
【写作要求】 只能使用5个句子表达全部内容
【评分标准】 句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯
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With the improvement of our living conditions, more and more people prefer to travel . Just as an old saying goes, “The world is a book, and those who do not travel read only a page” , which means travelling can broaden our horizons. Besides, we may meet those who have the same interest with us and develop a lifelong friendship while travelling. What’s more, we can learn much knowledge through traveling, thus enriching our experiences. Finally, travel is the best way of pastime, through which we can enjoy eating various food , seeing beautiful scenery and relax ourselves.
【解析】本文是一篇提纲作文。成文时要注意:1. 要点要全面;2. 只能使用5个句子表达全部内容;3.介绍当前的社会现象使用一般现在时;4.注意使用恰当的连接词和过渡句,以使行文连贯,顺畅;5.尽量使用非谓语短语,介词短语以及定语从句,状语从句等包含信息量大的长句,以增加文章亮点。
【亮点说明】文章要点全面,语言通顺,很好地完成了写作任务。使用的句型有定语从句who have the same interest with us and develop a lifelong friendship while travelling,介词短语With the improvement of our living conditions,和俗语”The world is a book, and those who do not travel read only a page 等。
考点:考查提纲作文
面对中学生“出国热”,社会对此有不同的看法。请你以Studying Abroad为题,根据以下提供的信息,谈谈自己的看法。
advantages | disadvantages |
1.良好的语言环境,更利于语言学习。 2.拓宽视野,学习国外先进的科学技术。 3.传播各民族间的不同文化。 | 1.年纪小,缺乏生活经验,自立能力差。 2.情感孤独,思乡。 3.生活学习费用高。 |
注意:1.第一句已为你写好,不计入总词数。
2.词数100左右
3.参考词汇:媒介,中间人mediator 民族 nation 费用 expense
In recent years, studying abroad has been popular.
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