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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。

修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Last Tuesday was a special day, the Earth Day. My classmates and I do a series of activities to arouse for the awareness of protecting our planet. We watched a movie, what made us realize that the earth is getting hotter but the ice at the North Pole is melting. Then we excited went to the park to plant trees. But digging holes for trees was such hard thing that we were all tired. In the afternoon, we collected cans, bottle and newspapers, and then took it to the recycling center. We donated the money we earned to a charity calling “We Are Together.” It was really a meaning day.

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这是一篇记叙文。主要讲述了上周二(地球日),作者和同学做了一些活动唤起保护地球的意识。

第一处:考查时态。根据语境可知,此处应该使用一般过去时,故将do改为did

第二处:考查介词。句意:我和我的同学做了一系列的活动来唤起我们保护地球的意识。根据句意可知,arouse意为唤起,是及物动词,后直接加宾语,故将for删掉。

第三处:考查定语从句连词。分析句子结构可知,a movie是先行词,在定语从句中作主语,指物,用关系代词which,而what不能引导定语从句,故将what改为which

第四处:考查并列连词。句意:我们看了一部电影,它让我们意识到地球正在变热,北极的冰正在融化。根据句意可知,此处表示并列关系,而非转折关系,故将but改为and

第五处:考查副词。句意:然后我们兴奋地去公园植树。根据句意和分析句子结构可知,excited是形容词不能修饰动词went,故将excited改为excitedly

第六处:考查冠词。句意:但是,挖树洞是如此困难的事情以至于我们都累了。根据句意可知,thing是可数名词,such+a+adj+n.+that是固定结构,意为如此……以至于……”。故在hard前加a

第七处:考查名词的数。句意:下午,我们收集了罐子、瓶子和报纸,然后把它们带到回收中心。根据句意和句子结构可知,bottle是可数名词,且和前后cansnewspapers是并列结构,故将bottle改为bottles

第八处:考查代词。分析句子结构可知,it指代上文单数可数名词,表示特指,在此处指代错误,再结合句意可知,them指代上文复数可数名词,表示特指,故将it改为them

第九处:考查非谓语动词。句意:我们把挣来的钱捐给了一个叫做我们在一起的慈善机构。分析句子结构可知,动词过去分词做后置定语,再结合句意可知,called意为叫作……”,故将calling改为called

第十处:考查形容词。句意:这真是有意义的一天。结合句意可知,meaning意为意味深长的,与句意不符,meaningful意为有意义的,故将meaning改为meaningful

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