题目内容
10．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有 10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下画一横线（ ），并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Last Sunday I saw a worst storm in years．It came sudden and went on for over three hours．After lunch，I went into my room to have a rest．The air was hot，but all was quiet．Then a strong wind started to blow into my room．Pieces of paper on my desk flew high into the air and some flew out the open window．As I ran out to catch it，big drop of rain began to fall．When I come back into the house，it was raining more harder and harder．Then I heard a loud crashing sound from the back of the house．When I ran out to find out that had happened，a big tree had fallen down and broke the top of the backroom．
分析 本文讲述了近年来最严重的一场暴风雨以及这场暴风雨带来的影响和危害．
解答 Last Sunday I saw a worst storm in years．It came sudden and went on for over three hours．After lunch，I went into my room to have a rest．The air was hot，but all was quiet．Then a strong wind started to blow into my room．Pieces of paper on my desk flew high into the air and some flew out∧the open window．As I ran out to catch it，big drop of rain began to fall．When I come back into the house，it was raining more harder and harder．Then I heard a loud crashing sound from the back of the house．When I ran out to find out that had happened，a big tree had fallen down and broke the top of the backroom．
详解：
1．a改为the；考查冠词，形容词最高级形式worst前面要加定冠词the．
2．sudden改为suddenly；考查副词，此处用副词作状语修饰动词came．
3．but改为and；考查连词，结合句意分析，上下文之间为并列关系，而非转折，故用and．
4．out后加of；考查介词，out是副词，后面不能跟宾语，故加介词of．
5．it改为them；考查人称代词，此处的人称代词指代上句中的Pieces of paper，故用复数形式them．
6．drop改为drops；考查名词，结合句意可知雨滴不会只有一个，要用复数形式drops．
7．come改为came；考查动词的时态，此处讲述过去发生的事情，故用一般过去时．
8．more改为much；考查比较级，用副词much修饰比较级，more可以帮助多音节单词构成比较级，但不能修饰比较级．
9．that改为what；考查名词性从句，这是一个宾语从句，疑问代词what在从句中作主语．
10．broke改为broken；考查并列结构，此处动词fallen与broke是并列成分并列与had构成完成时，故都要用过去分词形式．
点评 短文改错时要注意一下几点：1．快速阅读，整体把握短文大意．2．重视语境以及上下文的关系．3．充分运用基础语言知识找出错误所在．
