Question

【题目】书面表达

假设你是高一、五班的李越，有感于校园中存在的随意涂写（scribble--v.动词）和乱丢垃圾（litter---v.动词）的行为（behavior），请用英语给校长写一封100-120字左右的信。信中应包括以下内容：

1.说明写信目的；

2.对这些行为的感想并进行批评；

3.提出建议：多设垃圾桶（dustbins）；制定制度；养成好习惯。

注意：信的开头、结尾已给出（不计词数）。

Answer 1

【答案】

Mr. Principal,

I am Li Yue, a student from Class 5, Senior I. I am writing to draw your attention to some improper behavior among us students. Some students often litter and scribble at random, making our school dirty and unpleasant. It really has a bad effect on the image of our school. I always feel ashamed whenever I see these.

It is absolutely wrong for a student to litter and scribble about. Here, I advise that more dustbins should be placed around, which will be convenient for us to throw garbage into them. Additionally, we need make rules against such bad behavior so that students can develop good habits.

With the joint efforts of us, I am sure our school will become a more enjoyable place.

Thank you for your consideration.

Yours faithfully,

Li Yue

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇半开放性作文，要点需要考生自己组织，如随地吐痰的危害可以从传播疾病，有损形象等方面。政府要加强对这方面的教育的力度，人们也要走自律。我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。

【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语draw one’s attention to 吸引某人的注意力；has a bad effect on对。。有坏的影响；Some students often litter and scribble at random, making our school dirty and unpleasant.这个句子运用到非谓语动词做伴随状语；Here, I advise that more dustbins should be placed around, which will be convenient for us to throw garbage into them.这个句子运用到which引导的非限制性定语从句；