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短文改错

I felt sadly yesterday when our teacher told us something about the Project Hope in class. It has set up to help the children in the countryside who can't pay to go to school. After school I came home. I was wondering if I could do something for the Project then I caught sight of money－collecting box on the table. Then I made up my minds to send my pocket money which I had saved for almost one year to the children who wanted to go to school. I wrote a letter to them and hurried to the post office. Together with the letter I posted the money and sent with my best wishes to them.

1．________　　2．________　　3．________　　4．________

5．________　　6．________　　7．________　　8．________

9．________　　10．________

Answer 1

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解析：

1．sadly改为sad。feel“感到”是联系动词，后接形容词作表语。 　　2．has后加been。It指代the Project Hope，谓语动词应该用被动语态。 　　3．pay改为afford。pay…to do sth．表示“为做……付款／给钱”，而这里指孩子们不能支付上学的费用，afford更准确。 　　4．√。 　　5．then改为when。when在这里是并列连词，意为“正在此时，就在这时”，它连接两个并列分句，相当于and then，and at that time。 　　6．money－collecting box前加the或my，表示特指。 　　7．minds改为mind。make up one's mind为固定短语，意为“下定决心”。 　　8．almost改为nearly。almost和nearly两个词都有“差不多、几乎”的意思，但放在具体数字前时，常用nearly，而不用almost。 　　9．wanted改为want。孩子们想上学的心情和意愿是一种客观事实，用一般现在时比较好。 　　10．删去with。send在这里表示“传、寄、送”，是及物动词，with多余。