书面表达近来很多高中毕业生利用暑假期间学习开车.请你根据以下提示写一篇有关学开车的利与弊的文章.利:1．一种非常有积极意义的经历,2．为你提供方便,3．给你独立的感觉.弊:1．市内停车不便,2．费用较高,3．安全隐患.注意:1. 文章开头已为你写好.不计入总词数.2. 短文须包括所有要点.可适当增加细节.以使行文流畅.3. 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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近来很多高中毕业生利用暑假期间学习开车，请你根据以下提示写一篇有关学开车的利与弊的文章。

利：1．一种非常有积极意义的经历；2．为你提供方便；3．给你独立的感觉。弊：1．市内停车不便；2．费用较高；3．安全隐患。

注意：1. 文章开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。

2. 短文须包括所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文流畅。

3. 词数：120词左右。

These days many high school graduates are learning driving during their summer vacation. In my opinion , learning to drive a car is a very positive experience for an individual.

Knowing that you are able to drive makes you confident. Also, the ability to drive gives you a feeling of independence, which means you can go wherever and whenever you want. It is much more convenient and quicker to get around in a car than to wait for a bus.

On the other hand, it is sometimes difficult to find a parking place in the city with the number of cars increasing so fast. Besides, it can be expensive--- not just to buy a car, but also to pay for petrol and all the repairs your car will need. Apart from that, lack of experience may get you into a car accident. If so, it will be wiser to take a bus.

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试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文，话题是有关学开车的利与弊，需要写的内容已经给出，分利和弊两个方面介绍，文章结构应该是很清楚的，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文，需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。

【亮点说明】这篇范文最大的特点是句式多变，语法涉及的全面，例如：learning to drive a car is a very positive experience for an individual.这句话使用动名词做主语， Knowing that you are able to drive makes you confident. 这句话使用宾语从句，Also, the ability to drive gives you a feeling of independence, which means you can go wherever and whenever you want. 这句话使用了非限制性定语从句和让步状语从句，It is much more convenient and quicker to get around in a car than to wait for a bus.这句话使用了it做形式主语， it is sometimes difficult to find a parking place in the city with the number of cars increasing so fast.这句话使用了with复合结构， it can be expensive--- not just to buy a car, but also to pay for petrol and all the repairs your car will need. 这句话使用了not just…but also…的结构，还有省略关系代词的定语从句， If so, it will be wiser to take a bus.这句话使用了省略句。还有文章使用了In my opinion，On the other hand, Besides, Apart from that这样的关联词使文章更加连贯。

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