Question

下面这篇短文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线 （﹨）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意: 1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；

     2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

I believe that everyone in the world loves their mother. So am                                                           

I. My

mother is a ordinary teacher.  She works hard at school, just as other

mothers do every day. In fact, she isn’t good health. She have been suffering

from arthritis(关节炎) for  many years. In spite of this, she never stops

working or giving up hope. I still remember the day and when my mother

received a card of congratulations for Teacher’s Day from her director. The

card was read “Thank you for your hard works; Happy Teacher’s Day to

you!” At that moment, I was so moving that tears came to my eyes. I am

proud of my mother because she is my best teacher as good as my mother.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

    I believe that everyone in the world loves their mother. So am I. My mother

                                                           do

is a  ordinary teacher. She works hard at chool, just as other mothers

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do every day. In fact, she isn’t∧ good health. She have been suffering from

                                 in                has

arthritis(关节炎) for  many years. In spite of this, she never stops working or

giving up hope. I still remember the day and when my mother received

gives

a card of congratulations for Teacher’s Day from her director. The card was read “Thank

you for your hard works;  Happy Teacher’s Day to you!” At that moment, I was so

               work

moving that tears came to my eyes. I am proud of my mother because moved

she is my best teacher as good as my mother.

                          well

【解析】

 与前面的loves 一致。

 ordinary 是元音开头。

 in good health身体好

 she是第三人称单数。

 gives与前面的stops并列。

 此处是when引导的定语从句，and多余。

 read此处意为“解释作”，不用被动。The telegram reads as follows. 电文如下。

 hard work困难的事。work是不可数名词。

 表示“人感动的”用moved。

 as well as用来连接两个并列的成分, 作“也, 还”解。