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1．青少年研究专家Susan Beacham，在自己的英文网站上开辟专栏，邀请大家分享心目中的"最好礼物"．她认为，礼物贵在心意，应为之付出时间和精力．
假设你是李华，请用英文发帖，内容应包括：
•赞同Susan的看法
•你收到或送出的最好礼物是什么
•该礼物的意义
•期待大家回复
注意：（1）词数100字左右；（2）符合语言规范；（3）开头仅供参考，也可以自写开头
I am LiHua，a high school student from China..Recently I have read an article written by Susan Beacham，who thinks …

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息青少年研究专家Susan Beacham，在自己的英文网站上开辟专栏，邀请大家分享心目中的"最好礼物"．她认为，礼物贵在心意，应为之付出时间和精力．假设你是李华，请用英文发帖，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：•赞同Susan的看法
•你收到或送出的最好礼物是什么•该礼物的意义•期待大家回复   2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：be for （赞成），lies in （在于），value（珍重），care about（关心），at a loss（茫然不知所措），recommend you to do（推荐某人做…..）．
The best gift I've ever received is a book from my English teacher，Debbie，which she brought to me when she returned from her holiday in USA．【高分句型】
I value this book because it shows me how to keep the balance of friendship in a positive way．【高分句型】

解答 Dear  everyone，
    I am Li Hua，a high school student from China．Recently I have read an article written by Susan Beacham，who thinks the value of gifts lies in its intension．The best gift I've ever received is a book from my English teacher，Debbie，which she brought to me when she returned from her holiday in USA．【高分句型】The book's name is Chicken Soup for the Teenage Soul：The Real Deal：Friends．I value this book because it shows me how to keep the balance of friendship in a positive way．【高分句型】And I must thank my favorite teacher for her care about me because she found me at a loss dealing with friends at one time．Reading it，I have been inspired and balanced myself in life and study．（你收到或送出的最好的物是什么）
      I strongly recommend you to read it and share what you gain with me in your reply．（期待大家回复）                                             
                                                                                                                                                                                                                      Yours ever，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                       Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．

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