Question

【题目】【原创】分析以下漫画并根据要求完成一篇不少于120的英语短文。

要点如下：

１.概括漫画内容；

２.分析产生这一现象的原因；

３.谈谈你对这一问题的看法。

注意：文章开关已给出，不计入总词数

（秦建宇漫画）

As is vividly illustrated in the picture......

Answer 1

【答案】

As is vividly illustrated in the picture,in some schools study is the only thing they focus on, and they pay no attention to students’ other abilities, thus turning out students who cannot cater to the needs of society.

The picture sets me reflecting on our present school education. There are in my opinion, many factors contributing to the phenomenon.First, faced with fierce competition, many students desire to achieve high scores in the College Entrance Examination and enter an ideal university, which will give them an edge in their future career, so they cannot afford to spend time on things other than study. Second, with pressure form parents and society, schools have to sacrifice students’ development of other abilities for their academic performance.

As for me, it is of great importance for students to develop various kinds of abilities. Only in this way can they adapt to our changing society. Besides , it is high on the agenda for schools to switch their attention to cultivating students’ all-round abilities.

【解析】本文涵盖了题目所要求的三方面内容，文章的三部分连贯自然，一气呵成。画面上有一棵大树，只剩下唯一一根“学习”的树枝，其他的如“动手能力”、“组织能力”、“表演能力”等树枝都被“某些学校教育”这把锯子锯掉了。更难能可贵的是文章中较多地使用了复杂的句型结构和高级词汇，展示了作者良好的语言功底。首段中thus turning out students who cannot cater to the needs of society.其中cater to the needs of society意为“满足社会的需求”。The picture sets me reflecting on our present school education，本句中，set sb.doing sth.使某人处于某种状况；reflect on认真思考。faced with fierce competition,为过去分词作状语；which will give them an edge in their future career, which引导非限制性定语从句等；Only in this way can they adapt to our changing society.本句使用了倒闭结构。“Only+状语”前置时，句子使用部分倒装。另外最后一句 it is high on the agenda for schools to switch their attention to cultivating students’ all-round abilities.使用了固定句型，意为：对某人来说做某事是当务之急。