Question

假如你叫刘薇，今年六月份将从新华中学高三毕业，打算到美国加利福尼亚大学留学，现在请你根据下面的个人信息，用英语写一封信，申请留学。

姓名：刘薇   性别：女   出生年月：1994年6月   毕业学校：新华中学

学业：各门功课优秀   申请院校：加利福尼亚大学

申请专业：计算机科学   兴趣爱好：网络和英语   电子信箱：liuwei94@sina．com

注意：

1． 信件必须包括以上内容，不能逐句翻译，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

2． 词数：120左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数。

参考词汇：加利福尼亚大学：the University of California

Dear Sir or Madam,

I’m writing in the hope that I can obtain a chance for my further study in computer science in your university．                                                                  

Yours sincerely

                                                         Liu Wei

Answer 1

One Possible version ：

I’m writing in the hope that I can obtain a chance for my further study in computer science in your university．

      First, please allow me to take a brief introduction of myself． I’m Liu Wei, a girl born in June, 1994． I’m graduating from Xinhua High School this coming June． I’m an all-student with a keen interest in computers and the Internet． Besides, I’m good at English． I know that the University of California is ranked among the most famous universities in the USA, and that’s the very reason why I’m now applying to further my university study in your Computer Science Department．

    I would appreciate it if you could take the trouble to provide me with some information and send me the necessary application materials． By the way, my email address is liuwei94@sina．com．

    Looking forward to your reply．

                                                                                   Yours sincerely,

                                                                                              Liu Wei