题目内容
12.假如你是李华,一名高中生.在春节期间社区里有很多外来务工人员坚守岗位,未能回家.下面四幅图描述了你和小区里的伙伴节前为他们送去温馨,共享节日欢愉的过程.请根据图片的先后顺序,写一篇周记,记录下此事.分析 高分句型一:
I decided to do something unusual when students were enjoying the start of the winter vacation.
高分句型二:
Sitting around the table,we made dumplings with them,talking about families and hometown respectively.
句型一 when students were enjoying the start of the winter vacation.该句是一个由when引导的时间状语从句,when在从句中作时间状语
句型二 talking about families and hometown respectively 该部分在句中使用了现在分词短语作伴随状语
此外,该文章中还有以下高级词汇和重要短语:
decide to do sth 决定做某事…offer sb sth 向某人提供某物 contribute to 为..作出贡献
解答 I decided to do something unusual when students were enjoying the start of the winter vacation.(高分句型一)Early in the morning,I called several friends in our community together and had a heated discussion about what to do for the remaining migrant workers.(提出想法)After reaching an agreement,we took immediate action.At our invitation to my home,the cleaners and security guards in our community were greatly surprised.At this time of the traditional festival,making dumplings was our first choice.Sitting around the table,we made dumplings with them,talking about families and hometown respectively.(高分句型二)During the dinner,my friend and I expressed our wholehearted thanks and best wishes to these lovely people.After dinner,we all gave good performances,singing and dancing joyfully.
Despite being away from home,migrant workers offer us good service,contributing greatly to the building of the city.Here,I'd like to say something to them--Happy Spring Festival,our family members!(美好祝愿)
点评 看图作文要求将画面所包含的有效信息用文字表达出来,并适当发挥想象.写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次.
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