四.写作第一节短文改错(共10小题,每小题1分.满分10分) 以下标有题号的每一行均有一个错误.请找出.并按下列情况改正: 此行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉.在该行右边横线上写出该词. 此行缺一个词:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧).在该行右边横线上写出该加的词. 此行错一个词:在错的词下划一横线.在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词. 注意:请在答题卡题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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四、写作(共两节，满分35分)

第一节短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)

以下标有题号的每一行均有一个错误，请找出，并按下列情况改正：

此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词。

此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。

此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。

注意：请在答题卡上作答。

At the beginning of this term, we have a new classmate, 76．

Fang Hua, from another school. At first I don't think much 77．

of him. Therefore, after he got a seat beside me, I got to know 78．

him and we became friends. He isn't as proudly as I thought; 79．

in fact he have very kind and friendly. He is good at physics. 80．

When I have trouble with it, I'll turn him for help. I also 81．

find him humorous. He can even make up joke about things 82．

around us. While someone in my class is in low spirits, he is 83．

sure to making him happy. He is good at sports, too. Though 84．

he isn't perfect, we look him as our good friend. 85．

【答案】

76.have改为had 77.don’t改为didn’t 78.therefore改为however 79.proudly改为proud 80.have改为is 81.turn后加to 82.joke改为jokes 83.while改为when 84.making 改为make 85.look后加on

【解析】略

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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10初语言错误，每句中最多有两处。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符合(^)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。

修改：在错的词下划—横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

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第四部分写作（共两节，满分35分）
第一节短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满份10分)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10初语言错误，每句中最多有两处。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符合(^)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
修改：在错的词下划—横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.至允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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