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【题目】书面表达

假如你是李明，你马上就要去英国留学。你的英国笔友George来信询问你在留学期间是住在学生公寓还是住在寄宿家庭，你现在回信告诉他，你打算住在寄宿家庭，并且说明你的至少三个理由。词数120字左右。

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【答案】

Dear George,

I am glad to hear from you. In your last letter you asked me whether to live in students accommodation or English family when I am in Britain. After careful consideration I choose to board with an English family. The following are my reasons.

First, boarding with an English family will give me more chances to practice speaking English because if I want to communicate with them, I have to force myself to use English. Second, boarding with an English family, I can not only learn language but also experience their culture and this is the best way to adapt to a new culture. Last, when I feel lonely and miss my family, it is a great comfort to have a substitute family to be with.

So I think it is better to stay with an English family. By the way will you please recommend one for me? Thank you very much and I am looking forward to meeting you.

Yours,

Li Ming

【解析】试题分析：假如你是李明，你马上就要去英国留学。你的英国笔友George来信询问你在留学期间是住在学生公寓还是住在寄宿家庭，你现在回信告诉他，你打算住在寄宿家庭，并且说明你的至少三个理由。要点是：1、自己的打算，2、自己的理由、3、自己的要求。这是一篇明显的提纲作文，就是把文章的情景和内容要求说出以进行写作。考生在审题的时候应该注意审要求、审文体、审人称、审时态。题文已经告知要求，那么文体应为书信文体，即介绍主要行程；又根据“你是李明” 写作时即用第一人称“我”，即李明；时态主要用一般将来时。考生在写作时应该选择自己最熟悉、最有把握的词语、句型，将要点逐条表达出来。表达时应该综合运用所掌握的知识，避开生僻的词汇，并克服母语的干扰，按照英语的习惯方式，用地道的英语表达出来，力求做到语言准确无误。然后根据要点选词组句，然后按照篇章结构连句成篇。

【亮点说明】本文语言凝练，论点鲜明，条理层次清晰。文章第一段表达自己的感谢之情决定；文章第二段就介绍自己这样选择的理由；第三段介绍自己的要求和表达感谢。文章使用了when引导的状语从句when I feel lonely and miss my family（我感到寂寞或想念家人时）和动词的ing形式做主语boarding with an English family will give me more chances to practice speaking English（寄宿在一英国人家里会给我很多练习说英语的机会）和because引导的状语从句，其中有包含if引导的条件状语从句because if I want to communicate with them, I have to force myself to use English（因为如果我想和他们一起交流，我就不得不强迫自己说英语）。高级短语和结构：by the way顺便说一声，adapt to适应。最后一句使用Thank you very much and I am looking forward to meeting you非常感谢，期待见到您，给文章一个完美的结束。