Question

7．假定你是学生李华，你得知你的英国朋友Jack正在学习中文，并且遇到了一些困难．请你根据以下提示给Jack写一封电子邮件，告诉他一些学习中文的方法：要点如下：
1．写信的目的；2．相关建议；3．你的希望．
注意：1．词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Jack，
I am happy to know that you are beginning to learn Chinese．It's true that Chinese is not easy to learn，but there is no need to feel worried．【高分句型一】I will give you some advice．（写信目的）
As far as I am concerned，it's important that you choose a good teacher who knows the difference between the two languages．【高分句型二】Most importantly，you should always keep in mind thatyou must have confidence in yourself．Don't be frightened by the seemingly hard task．Break your main task into smaller goals and you will realize your dream in the end．（学习中文的方法）
Hope you will be getting on better with your Chinese（希望）
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 这是关于学习中文的方法的作文．根据题目要求可知用第一人称和一般现在时态．内容包括：一 写信目的；二学习中文的方法；三希望． 
高分句型：
1．It's true that Chinese is not easy to learn，but there is no need to feel worried．句子里It做形式主语，代指that 引导的主语从句；but连接并列句there is no need to 表示"没有必要去做"． 
汉语是真的不容易学习，但是也没有必要感到焦虑． 
2．As far as I am concerned，it's important that you choose a good teacher who knows the difference between the two languages．句子里As far as I am concerned表示"就我而言"；It做形式主语，代指that 引导的主语从句；who引导定语从句代指先行词a good teacher． 
我认为你选择一个知道两种语言不同点的老师很重要．

解答 Dear Jack，
       I am happy to know that you are beginning to learn Chinese．It's true that Chinese is not easy to learn，but there is no need to feel worried．【高分句型一】I will give you some advice．（写信目的） 
       As far as I am concerned，it's important that you choose a good teacher who knows the difference between the two languages．【高分句型二】Most importantly，you should always keep in mind thatyou must have confidence in yourself．Don't be frightened by the seemingly hard task．Break your main task into smaller goals and you will realize your dream in the end．（学习中文的方法） 
     Hope you will be getting on better with your Chinese．（希望）                                                                                                                             
                                                                                                                                                                                                   Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                    Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．