Question

16．假如你是李华，你的外国朋友Alex 下周打算参加在伦敦中国大使馆举行的一个接待会，与一些中国高中生和老师见面．他向你求助，请你写一封邮件帮他解答以下问题．
1．他不太擅长和陌生人聊天．
2．和中国同学见面应该谈论哪些话题．
3．哪些话题不适合谈论．
注意：
1．词数100左右．
2．开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数．
3．参考词汇：Chinese Embassy 中国大使馆
Dear Alex，
I hope you and your family are well---it's a long time sine I heard from you last time．
             ．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息外国朋友Alex 下周打算参加在伦敦中国大使馆举行的一个接待会，与一些中国高中生和老师见面．他向你求助，请你写一封邮件帮他解答以下问题，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：他不太擅长和陌生人聊天；和中国同学见面应该谈论哪些话题；哪些话题不适合谈论．2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：have trouble （ in ） doing sth做某事方面有困难；are interested in．对…感兴趣；keep off 远离；agree with同意；look forward to 盼望
 I hope you enjoy your trip to the Embassy and that it's fun meeting the Chinese students and teachers．（高分句型一）
Chinese students are like the students everywhere---they like sports，music，fashion，and travel-so it will be easy for you to find topics that they are interested in．（高分句型二）
For many of them it will be their first time in England，so you could ask them about where they've been，what they've seen，what they like and don't like，and what they find interesting．（高分句型三）
It's also not a problem to ask about life at home in China．I'm sure they'd be happy to tell you about what Chinese schools are like and how they spend their free time．（高分句型四）
Of course，it's always a good idea to keep off topics like politics，as people have different opinions，and they may not agree with you．（高分句型五）

解答 Dear Alex，
       I hope you and your family are well-it is long time since I've heard from you．The email is very interesting．I hope you enjoy your trip to the Embassy and that it's fun meeting the Chinese students and teachers．（高分句型一） I don't think you will have any trouble talking to them．
      Chinese students are like the students everywhere---they like sports，music，fashion，and travel-so it will be easy for you to find topics that they are interested in．（高分句型二）For many of them it will be their first time in England，so you could ask them about where they've been，what they've seen，what they like and don't like，and what they find interesting．（高分句型三）
      It's also not a problem to ask about life at home in China．I'm sure they'd be happy to tell you about what Chinese schools are like and how they spend their free time．（高分句型四）Of course，it's always a good idea to keep off topics like politics，as people have different opinions，and they may not agree with you．（高分句型五） I hope this information has been useful，and I wish you the best of luck at the Chinese Embassy---be sure to write and tell me all about it!
      Looking forward to hearing from you soon．
                                                                                                                                                                                                              Yours sincerely，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                     Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．