Question

3．请根据下面内容提示，写一篇日记
1.5月15日，星期天，你和几位同学早七点在校门口集合，之后步行了半小时去参观动物园．
2．天气很好，游客很多．你们喜欢猴子．碰到几位外国朋友，聊了一会儿，很开心．3．但也看到了一些让你沮丧的不文明现象，如随地吐痰、乱扔垃圾、高声喧哗等．
4．感想
要求：
（1）文章必须包括所给的要点；
（2）可适当增加细节；
（3）字数100左右．
May 15，Sunday                                   FineToday I visited the zoo with several classmates．
                                                                         

Answer 1

分析 本文为日记．
写作要点为：1．时间；2．事情经过，遇到的问题；3．感想．

解答 April 15，Sunday                                   Fine
Today I visited the zoo with several classmates．Early in the morning，we got together at 7 am．outside our school gate．Then we went to the zoo on foot．It was half an hour's walk．When we got there，the zoo was already full of people．There are many animals in the zoo，which were very interesting，but we were especially interested in monkeys．They made all kinds of faces and we also talked with some foreign guests in English．Laughing and chatting，we really had a good time．However，some people behaved very badly there．For example，they dropped litter everywhere，as well as spit freely in public，which made me depressed．I think it is everyone's responsibility to behave themselves，since it's well known that China is an ancient civilized country with a long history．I do hope changes will happen in the future．
    I really had an unforgettable time today．

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