Question

【题目】书面表达

上周日，你们学校组织了一次志愿者活动。假设你是李华，请你根据以下提示给校报写一封信，报道相关情况，要点包括：

1. 活动地点：文化广场；

2. 活动形式：发传单、做演讲；

3. 活动内容：宣传地震常识和防震知识；

4. 参加活动的感受。

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：leaflet传单

Dear Editor，

We took part in a voluntary activity organized by our school last Sunday.

Best wishes!

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Editor，

We took part in a voluntary activity organized by our school last Sunday. We gathered at the Culture Square, passing leaflets to passersby from which they can learn what the earthquake is and how to protect themselves against the earthquake. The leaflets drew the attention of the public to the damage that an earthquake can cause and told them to take action in a right and efficient way. Some made a public speech, telling people about the best place where they can hide when an earthquake occurs.

We have learned much from the voluntary activity, which offers us an opportunity to contribute to society. We told the public about the situation because we thought everyone should be concerned about each other and take responsibility for promoting a public cause.

Best wishes!

Yours，

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：考查开放性作文写作,开放性作文给出了一个话题，并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体

【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语 draw the attention of吸引…的注意力及Some made a public speech, telling people about the best place where they can hide when an earthquake occurs中where引导的定于从句和We have learned much from the voluntary activity, which offers us an opportunity to contribute to society中which引导的非限制性定于从句等。