Question

　

第三部分：写作(共两节,满分35分)　　

第一节    短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)

请对每一行作出判断，如无错误，在该行右边横线上划一个√，如有错误，按照改错的方法改，请将答案写在答题卡上。

Once an old man saw a bag on his way to home.                             76. _______

    In the bag there was a wolf. It was catching and put in                 77. _______

    the bag by a shepherd（牧羊人） a few minutes ago.

    The wolf asked the old man to let him out.                                 78. _______

    The old man took pity on him and opened bag.                             79. _______

    When the wolf got out， said to the old man， "I am very hungry.  80. _______

    I want to eat you." The other old man could do nothing                  81. _______

    and cry for help. Just then the shepherd came and saw this.            82. _______

    He beat the wolf to death by a stick. Then he said to the                83. _______

    old man， "wolves want to eat men all the time. It's nature            84. _______

    will never change. We should took this as a good lesson."              85. ______　　

Answer 1

  76 删去to.home是副词， 前面不能接介词。　　

    77. catching改为caught.主语it与catch的关系为被动关系,故用was caught.　　

    78. 此行无错。　　

    79. bag前加the.bag在此重复提到， 为特指。　　

    80. said前加he.代词漏用错误。此句缺少主语,并且要与上文him保持一致。　　

    81. 删去other.接上下文没有"另一个老人".　　

    82. and（cry）改为but（cry）。can do nothing but意为"只得做"，为习惯搭配。　　

    83. by改为with.介词错误。"用……工具"常用"with……".　　

    84. It's改为Its.同音词混淆错误。此处应为"它的本性".　　

    85. took改为take.情态动词后应接动词原形。