Question

【题目】假定你是李华。校学生会打算举办一个美国文化节，急需一些美国杂志。请你给美国笔友Jimmy写一封email求助，让他帮忙选购一些能反映美国社会、适合中国学生的杂志寄过来，并告知会承担相关费用。

内容包括：

1. 求助的原因；

2. 对杂志的要求；

3. 费用。

注意：

1. 词数80左右。

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Jimmy,

I’m writing to ask for a favor from you. To help us students gain a glimpse into American culture, the Student Union is organizing an American Culture Festival. We’re now in urgent need of some American popular magazines that can reflect modern American society. So, could you please help select and buy some and send them to us? We will cover all the relevant costs. Also, we would appreciate it if you could see to it that the contents of the magazines are suitable for Chinese middle school students. Thanks a lot!

Please reply at your earliest convenience!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】本文是一篇书信，写的时候要注意信的格式，并注意组织好篇章结构和要点的表述。其中要点包括：1. 求助的原因 2.对杂志的要求；3. 告知会承担所有费用。注意语言要简练，不罗嗦。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

【范文亮点】：

本篇书面表达要点全面，结构紧凑，语言风格符合书信的文体要求，是一篇较好的范文。在文中，We’re now in urgent need of some American popular magazines that can reflect modern American society.这句话应用了that引导的定语从句，that又做了从句的主语。 we would appreciate it if you could see to it that the contents of the magazines are suitable for Chinese middle school students.这句话应用了虚拟语气。So，also等连词使文章语言自然流畅，内容过渡自然，增加了文章的可读性，使文章的表达更具有逻辑性，更富有条理。