Question

【题目】书面表达

假如你是李华，你的好友David在中学生英语歌咏比赛中荣获一等奖。请你根据以下内容，给他写一封祝贺信。内容包括：

1．向他表示祝贺；

2．请他介绍成功的经验；

3．希望有一天能像他一样取得成功。

注意：

1．词数100左右。

2．开头和结尾已为你写好，但不计入总词数。

3．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear David,

I hear that you have own first prize

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear David,

I hear that you have won first prize in the English Singing Contest of Middle School Students, so I am writing to give congratulations to you from the bottom of my heart.

As your best friend. I am proud of you! Your pronunciation and fluent English, especially your beautiful voice, left me a deep impression. I hope that I can be successful like you one day. So could you share with me how you improve your spoken English? Your experience will be of great help to me in my learning.

I will appreciate it if you can write me back and give me your advice. Look forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：假如你是李华，你的好友David在中学生英语歌咏比赛中荣获一等奖。请你根据以下内容，给他写一封祝贺信。内容包括：1．向他表示祝贺；2．请他介绍成功的经验；3．希望有一天能像他一样取得成功。写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。注意：1．词数100左右。2．开头和结尾已为你写好，但不计入总词数。3．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【亮点说明】 I hear that you have won first prize in the English Singing Contest of Middle School Students, so I am writing to give congratulations to you from the bottom of my heart.句中使用宾语从句和并列句；I hope that I can be successful like you one day.句中使用宾语从句；So could you share with me how you improve your spoken English?在问句中使用了宾语从句；I will appreciate it if you can write me back and give me your advice. I will appreciate it if固定句式的运用为文章增色添彩；另外一些高级词汇、短语am proud of、especially、left me a deep impression、share with、be of great help、Look forward to等的使用，也是文中亮点。