英语课上.老师要求同桌同学相互修改作文．假设以下短文为你同桌所写.请你对其进行修改．文中共有10处错误.每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改．增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧).并在此符号下面写出该加的词．删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉．修改:在错的词下划一横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的词．注意:1．每处错误及其修� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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10．英语课上，老师要求同桌同学相互修改作文．假设以下短文为你同桌所写，请你对其进行修改．文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Last Sunday I saw a worst storm in years．It came sudden and went on for over three hours．After lunch，I went into my room to have a rest．The air was hotter，and all is quiet．Then a strong wind started to blow into my room．Pieces of paper on my desk flew high into the air and some flew out the open window．As I ran out to catch them，big drop of rain began to fall．When I came back into house，it was raining harder and harder．I tried very hard to close the window．Then I heard a loudly crashing（碰撞的）sound from the back of the house．When I ran out of my room to find out what had happened：a big tree had fallen down and broke the top of the backroom．

分析本文是一篇记叙文．文章讲述了作者见证的一场大暴风雨的故事：上周末午饭后，作者回屋准备休息，随后刮起了大风，下起了大雨．当作者去捡那些被风吹走的纸的时候，他听到房子后方巨大的碰撞声，然后发现倒下的大树把后门的门顶压坏了．

解答 Last Sunday I saw a worst storm in years．It came sudden
                         the                                          suddenly
and went on for over three hours．After lunch，I went into

my room to have a rest．The air was hotter，and all is quite．
                                                       hot                  was
Then a strong wind started to blow into my room．

Pieces of paper on my desk flew high into the air and some

flew out∧the open window．As I ran out to catch them，
            of
big drop of rain began to fall．When I came back into∧house，
     drops                                                        my
it was raining harder and harder．I tried very hard to close the window．

Then I heard a loudly crashing（碰撞的）sound from the back of the house．
                   loud
When I ran out of my room to find out what had happened：

a big tree had fallen down andbrokethe top of the backroom．
                                           broken
1．a→the 考查冠词．形容词的最高级前要用定冠词the表示．
2．sudden→suddenly 考查副词．根据句意，这里修饰动词came要用副词形式．
3．hotter→hot 考查形容词．从上下文可知，这里没有比较，故不用比较级．
4．is→was 考查时态．由前面的时间状语last Sunday可知，故事发生在过去，要用过去时态．
5．out后加of 考查介词的固定搭配．当不及物动词后面加宾语的时候，要先加介词，根据后面的the open window可知，该处要用flew out of the open window．
6．drop→drops 考查名词单复数．drop作名词表示"水滴"时，是可数名词．雨滴肯定不止一颗，故要用复数形式．
7．into后加my 考查代词．根据上下文句意可知，这里特指"我的"房子，故要加限定词my．
8．loudly→loud 考查形容词的用法．根据前面的a和后面的crashing sound可知，这里要用形容词修饰名词．
9．去掉when 考查连词．根据前后的逻辑关系和后面的冒号可知，这里不是引导时间状语从句，不需要when．
10．broke 考查动词的时态语态．由and可知，这里是连接两个并列的谓语动词．根据前面的had fallen down可知，时态是过去完成时，所以要把broke改成broken．

点评 1．不及物动词后面不加宾语，如果要加宾语，必须要先加相应介词，再加宾语．
2．loud和loudly的区别：loudly只能用作副词；loud既可作副词，也可用作形容词 loud  adv．（与 loudly 同义）"响亮地"、"大声"或"高声地"，侧重发出的音量大，传得远，一般多用来与speak，talk，laugh，sing 等连用，且必须放在这些动词之后
loud  adj．"响亮的"、"大声的"或"高声的"
loudly  adv．只用作副词，"喧闹地"或"嘈杂地"；"响亮地"，loudly 放在动词前后均可

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