题目内容
假如你是李华,Jane 是美国人。在她暑假来中国游玩时你们相识,并成为好朋友。Jane回国后,你很想念她,于是给她写了一封信,并且和她谈了你对高一新生活的感受。信头信尾均已给出；词数100左右。
Dear Jane,
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Yours sincerely,
Xiaohua
Dear Jane,
How’s everything going? I’m so glad to have met you and become friends with you. I miss you very much after you left China and thus I am writing this letter to tell you something about me. I entered senior high school in September. The school is very beautiful and I feel that the new life is very exciting and full of challenges. My teachers and classmates are all very kind. I have decided to try my best to learn a lot from them. Of course, I will also do more exercise to keep fit.
Give my best regards to your parents and I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Xiaohua
解析试题分析：本文是一篇开放作文，给李华写一封信,并且和她谈了你对高一新生活的感受，并没有给出什么要点要求学生结合滋生的实际情况写作，在行文中，要注意多用些高级句型和词汇，我们可适当增加连贯词，以使行文连贯。范文中就使用了合理的连词和较高级的语法结构，使文章结构严谨，增色不少。
写作亮点：I miss you very much after you left China and thus I am writing this letter to tell you something about me.和The school is very beautiful and I feel that the new life is very exciting and full of challenges.这两句，使文章浑然一体。同时文章中使用了适当的连词，使用文章结构严谨，浑然一体。
考点：考查阅读和运用语言的能力。
点评：书面表达中的写信类作文，我们首先要完整的正确的表达出所有的写作要点。在写作中，如果语言基础好的话，多用较高级语法结构，这样可以使文章增色不少。同时要合理的使用适当的连词，这样文章才能结构严谨，浑然一体。
书面表达（满分30分）
假如你是李华，一位18岁的男孩，英语成绩非常突出，有两年英语家教的经验，现在是学校“爱心俱乐部”的成员，认为志愿工作能够使人树立信心，培养良好的交际技能。看到下面这则招聘信息，你愿意利用这次机会，为需要帮助的儿童献出自己的微薄之力，同时增长见识，了解社会。
请根据所给中、英文提示完成下面的英文邮件。
注意：1．110词左右。
2．邮件开头和结尾已为你写出，不计入总数。
3．可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
提示词：tutor vt. & n. 家教 Loving Heart Club 爱心俱乐部
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