Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。

增加；在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词

删除；把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉

修改；在错的词下划一横线， 并在该词下面写出修改后的词

注意； 1.每处错误及及其修改均仅限一词

       2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分

It was at five o’ clock yesterday afternoon which I was going home by bus. The bus was full of passenger, all of who kept silent. A mother with her little son were sitting nearby. All of a sudden, the son cried loudly. The mother tried to do what she could make him stop crying. However, the son goes on crying. After what seemed a long time, a man seating next to the mother said angry, “ I can’t stand it anymore. Why don’t you give him what he wants?” The mother answered quietly, “I would if I could. But what she wants is your cap.” Hearing of this, all the passengers burst into laughter.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

 which--that

 passenger--passengers

 who--whom

 were--was

 could^to

 goes--went

 seating--seated

 angry--angrily

 she--he

 去掉of

【解析】

试题分析：文章讲述了发生在公交车上的一件趣事，一个孩子哭个不停，惹得旁边一个男人生气了，结果发现婴儿是想要他的帽子，全车的乘客都不由得笑了。

 考查强调句型，it is/was...that是强调句型，强调除谓语外的成分，这里强调的是时间状语，强调句型去掉后不影响句意。故把which改为that。

 公交车里挤满了乘客，根据句意可知，有不止一个乘客，故把passenger改为passengers。

 考查定语从句。介词后用which或whom，关系代词who一般作主语，不能放在介词后，这里指人，故把who改为whom。

 考查主谓一致。with连接名词作主语时，遵循“就远原则”，谓语与with前面的保持一致，故把were改为was。

 考查不定式表目的。那个妈妈尽她所能来使婴儿停止哭泣，这里用不定式表目的，what she could是宾语从句，故在could后加to。

 根据第一句可知，是复数在昨天的事情，应该用一般过去时。故把goes改为went。

 seated坐着的，表状态，相当于sitting，故把seating改为seated。

 修饰动词said用副词，故把angry改为angrily。

 根据Why don’t you give him what he wants?可知，是一个男孩，故把she改为he。

 hear听到，是及物动词，hear of是“听说”的意思，听到这，所有的乘客都笑了。故去掉of。

考点：强调句型；名词复数；定语从句；主谓一致；不定式；副词