Question

This morning I went to a nearby food store to buy some breads. After the man in the store packing the bread in a small bag for me, I began to walk home with bag in my hand. On the way I met my next-door neighbor, Miss Wang, that was walking her dog .We greeted with each other and begin to talk about the weather. As we were talking, his dog came up at the bag in my hand though the bread gave off a delicious smell. As a result, some of the bread fell to the ground or the dog began to enjoy it. Five minutes late, I was back at the store to buy bread again.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 breads.改成bread

 packing改成packed

 with∧the

 that改成who

 去掉with

 begin改成began

 his改成her

 though改成because/since/as/for

 or改成and

 late改成 later,

【解析】

试题分析：

 bread“面包”是不可数名词,不能用breads

 这里用packed做谓语，packing是非谓语

 with∧the，特指“我手里的包”

 that改成who，这是非限制性定语从句，不能用that连接

 去掉with，greet是及物动词，问候彼此：greet each other

 和greeted并列用began

 指代Miss Wang的狗，用her dog

 因为面包发出香味，所以她的狗朝我的包走过来：though改成because/since/as/for

 面包掉在地上，狗开始吃，是并列关系：or改成and

 late是形容词：“迟的”， Five minutes later, 5分钟后

考点：考查短文改错

点评：本题考查较为细致，要求考生要特别耐心答题中注意句子中人称和数是否一致，时态是否一致。各种词性之间的区别以及一些常用句型，固定短语的应用。一般的这类题型不会出现太复杂的单词和句子，这类题型考察基础知识较多。平时应注重积累，熟记一些句型及惯用结构。修改前先细读短文，标出出错的位置，改完以后还得细读短文，看看改过后的短文是否语意通顺，