题目内容
【题目】假如你是高三学生李华,你的英国笔友Mary在给你的邮件中提到她很喜欢排球尤其喜欢中国女排并想了解其情况。请你给Mary回信介绍中国女排的情况。
内容包括:
1.1981-1986年获得“五连冠”;
2.二十世纪90年代遭遇“滑铁卢”;
3.2019年9月29日在日本再一次获得女排世界杯冠军为中华人民共和国建国70周年献礼;
4.女排精神对你的启示。
注意:1.词数100左右
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯
参考词汇:the Chinese Women Volleyball Team中国女子排球队
champion冠军 anniversary周年纪念日
Dear Mary,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mary,
How’s everything?
From your last E-mail I know you are very into volleyball and especially want to know about the Chinese Women Volleyball team. So I’m writing to share something related to it with you.
As is known to the Chinese people,the Chinese Women Volleyball team is one of the most wonderful sport teams in China. Once between 1981and 1986 they had a splendid history, winning the world champion five times on end, which made it well-known to the world. But in the 1990’s they failed again and again and never succeeded. However, no matter whatever difficulties they met with they didn’t lose heart. Thus, on September 29th they won the volleyball world cup champion a second time, which means a special gift to the 70th anniversary of the founding of the People’s Republic of China (PRC).
From above we can know that only if we learn from failure ,believe failure is the mother of success and strive for success can we achieve our ideal dreams.
Best wishes!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求写一封信。
第1步:根据提示可知,本篇为一封书信:假如你是高三学生李华,你的英国笔友Mary在给你的邮件中提到她很喜欢排球尤其喜欢中国女排并想了解其情况。请你给Mary回信介绍中国女排的情况。内容包括:1.1981-1986年获得“五连冠”;2.二十世纪90年代遭遇“滑铁卢”;3.2019年9月29日在日本再一次获得女排世界杯冠军为中华人民共和国建国70周年献礼;4.女排精神对你的启示。
第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组),如:the Chinese Women Volleyball team.(中国女子排球队);share something related to it with you(与你分享一些与它有关的事情);in the 1990’s(在九十年代);the 70th anniversary of the founding of the People’s Republic of China (PRC)(中华人民共和国成立七十周年);等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。