题目内容
【题目】你堂兄建华在国外学习, 你们经常用英文通信。他即将完成学业, 不久前来信就是否回国工作征求你的意见。请根据下列提示回信:
1.建议他回国;
2.你的理由是:1)学有所用, 就业容易;2)照顾父母。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.行文应连贯, 内容应完整;
3.开头语与落款已为你写好。
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【答案】Dear Jianhua,
I’m very glad to have received the letter you sent me two weeks ago. I’ve been thinking about the question you asked me. In my opinion, you should come back after you finish your studies abroad. For one reason, what you are studying is badly needed nowadays in China. It will be quite easy for you to find a good job. In fact, I know a few big companies in our city are hoping to hire people like you. For another reason, I think it will be much more convenient for you to look after your parents as they are getting old. Therefore, I think it’s a good idea for you to return. So what are you waiting for ?
Best wishes.
【解析】
本文书面表达属于应用文,要求写一封书信。
第1步:根据提示可知,本篇是一篇书信:你堂兄建华在国外学习, 你们经常用英文通信。他即将完成学业, 不久前来信就是否回国工作征求你的意见。请根据下列提示回信:1.建议他回国;2.你的理由是:1)学有所用, 就业容易;2)照顾父母。
第2步:根据写作要求确定关键词,如:In my opinion(以我看来);finish your studies abroad (完成你国外的学习);For another reason(因为另一个原因);I think it’s a good idea for you to return.(我认为你回来是一个好主意)等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态语态问题。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
本文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。