题目内容
【题目】假设你是李华，你的美国笔友David最近在学汉语,他给你发来一封电子邮件讲述他对学习汉语兴趣浓厚，但是他在学习汉语的过程中常常因为犯错误而懊恼。请你用英语给他回一封邮件。
内容包括：
1. 鼓励他继续努力，正确看待错误；
2. 给David提出一些学好汉语的建议(至少两条)；
3. 邀请他来中国玩。
注意：
1.词数 120左右；开头已经给出，不计入总次数。
2.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。
Dear David,
I’m glad to receive your e-mail and happy to know that you are interested in learning Chinese.
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Yours，Li Hua
【答案】
Dear David,
I’m glad to receive your e-mail and happy to know that you are interested in learning Chinese. It is well known that Chinese is difficult to learn. One can’t avoid making a mistake when learning a foreign language.
Here are some tips on how to learn Chinese. First, don't be afraid to make mistakes. Making mistakes is a good way to learn how to say things right. Second, if you know a Chinese friend, ask he or she to practise with you. Third, you should spend more time practising listening to and speaking Chinese frequently.
I wish you success in learning Chinese. I am expecting to hear from you. At last, I welcome you to come to China.
Yours，
【解析】
试题分析：这是一篇书信类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达。写作时注意准确运用时态，结合具体内容要用一般现在时，上下文意思要连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。例如 spend sometime doing something， success in doing something， expect to do something这些都是固定搭配用的比较好。另外在书信的开头用的定语从句较好。I’m glad to receive your e-mail and happy to know that you are interested in learning Chinese. It is well known that Chinese is difficult to learn.
