题目内容
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
This morning on my way to school I was deep moved by what I saw outside a
Patience is of a great importance in our daily life. One day I waited for a bus to come at a stop.
30 minute had passed, and no bus came. Upset and annoyed, I decided to walk with foot. But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived. I thought if I waited for one more minute, I would have caught it. If I had chosen to take the next bus, I would have had to wait for other 30 minutes. Only then do I realize my problem. Being impatient will possible waste the effort that we have put in. Now whenever I am close to lose my patience, I’ll think of this experience.
great前的of 去掉
minute→minutes
and→but
with→on
when→than
waited前加had
other→another
do→did
possible→possibly
lose→losing
【解析】
试题分析:
Patience is of a great importance in our daily life.。importance 为抽象名词,前面不可用冠词,所以a 去掉。
30 minute had passed,。minute是可数名词, 前面又有30,所以应用复数形式。minute改为minutes。
30 minute had passed, and no bus came.。等了30分钟,但是没有汽车来。应该是转折关系。and改为but。
I decided to walk with foot.。固定短语on foot,所以 with 改为 on。
But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived.。固定句型no sooner…than,所以when改为than。
I thought if I waited for one more minute。waited 动作应发生在动词thought之前,所以应该用过去完成时,waited 前面加had。
I would have had to wait for other 30 minutes.“再30分钟,又30分钟”应该是another 30 minutes,所以other改为another。
Only then do I realize my problem. 事情发生在过去,所以 do改为did。
Being impatient will possible waste the effort that we have put in.修饰动词应该用副词,所以possible改为possibly。
Now whenever I am close to lose my patience. be close to 短语中to 是介词所以lose改为losing。
考点:短文改错,考查发现和改正错误的能力。
