假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．作文中共有10处语言错误.每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改．增加:在缺词处加一个漏子符号(∧)并在其下面写出该加的词．删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉．修改:在错的词下划一横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的词．注意:1．每处错误及其修改均� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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15．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．作文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏子符号（∧）并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Last month，my younger sister Michelle and I held our first charity art exhibition in Shanghai．The exhibition，containing 140painting，raised 44，000yuan．All the money donated to Stepping Stones，the charity that supports poor children in China．Ever since I was a little girl，I had been in love with art．I have always been fascinating with the idea of creating beauty and emotion---how imaginative can transform a simple piece of paper into anything beyond the possibilities of the real world．I watched others create magic by simple moving our hands，and felt thrilled as I gradually learned to do this for myself．

分析上个月我妹妹和我在上海举办了我们的第一次慈善艺术展．募集到的资金都捐个了慈善机构．我从小就喜欢艺术，看到别人动动手就可以创造出精美绝伦的艺术品，我惊叹不已．现在我自己也慢慢学会了，真激动．

解答 Last month，my younger sister Michelle and I held our first charity art exhibition in Shanghai．The exhibition，containing 140painting，raised 44，000yuan．All the money∧donated to Stepping Stones，the charity that supports poor children in China．Ever since I was a little girl，I had been in love with art．I have always been fascinating with the idea of creating beauty and emotion---how imaginative can transform a simple piece of paper into anything beyond the possibilities of the real world．I watched others create magic by simple moving our hands，and felt thrilled as I gradually learned to do this for myself．
1．painting改为paintings；名词错误．句意表达的是复数．
2．加was；语态错误．句中donate与主语money之间构成动宾关系，要用被动；句意表达的是过去发生的动作，要用一般过去时态的被动语态．
3．the改为a；冠词错误．句中charity作Stepping Stones的同位语，要用不定冠词．
4．had改为have；时态错误．句意表达的从过去到现在，要用现在完成时态．
5．fascinating改为fascinated；分词错误．句中be fascinated with表示对…很着迷；主语是人，要用过去分词表示主语的感受；现在分词修饰物，表示物的特征或属性．
6．imaginative改为imagination；名词错误．句中imagination作主语，要用名词形式．
7．anything改为something；代词错误．题干是肯定句，anything用与否定或疑问句中．
8．simple改为simply；副词错误．句中simple修饰动词moving，要用副词形式．
9．our改为their；代词错误．句意指代的是others其他人，表达复数，要用表示复数概念的their来指代．
10．for去掉．句中myself作主语I的同位语，不需要介词．

点评短文改错题考查的是语境理解能力和用法基础知识．常考的知识点有：名词（单复数错误），动词（时态，语态，搭配，转换），代词（指代错误），形容词和副词（转换，比较等级），连词（and，but，or）等．偶尔也会考查逻辑错误，如本来用her，却用了his等等．解题是要注意：以句子为单位，以动词为中心．看句子要看完整，避免句子前后矛盾的错误；找错误要以动词为主，动词或与动词有关的错误占了改错的题的重要一部分．