Question

第三部分书面表达(共两节，满分35分)

第一节短文改错(满分10分)

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文， 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言 错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧) ，并在其下面 写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。

修改:在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修 改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起) 不计分。

My neighbour Li Hua is going to graduate college and he hasn't found the job yet. He was once advising to learn computer skills,so he thought it was difficult. When he saw others learning English,he shook his head,says it was too hard to remember the new word. He enjoyed watching TV,playing cards,smoking and so on. He felt it hard for him to give up all this habits. Not long ago,he went to look for a job. When he knew that talents were great needed,he sighed and regretted the time that what he had wasted. How he wished he has worked hard in college.

Answer 1

短文改错

My neighbour Li Hua is going to gradu- ate (∧frgm ) college and he hasn’t found the (a) job yet. He was once advising (advised) to learn computer skills,so (but) he thought it was difficult. When he saw others learning English,he shook his head,says (saying) it was too hard to remember the new word (words) . He enjoyed watching TV,playing cards,smoking and so on. He felt it hard for him to give up all this (these) habits. Not long ago,he went to look for a job. When he knew that talents were great (greatly ) needed,he sighed and regretted the time that What he had wasted. How he wished he has (had) worked hard in college.