Question

14．假如你是李华，昨天收到某报社编辑王先生的邮件，得知自己在本报社主办的英语征文大赛中获得了一等奖，他代表报社邀请你参加今年八月份举办的英语夏令营．
请你根据以下要点用英语给王先生写-封邮件：
1．感谢他的邮件通知；
2．接受邀请，期待参加夏令营；
3．咨询夏令营的具体相关信息（如费用、注意事项等）．
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Mr．Wang，
My name is Li Hua．I am writing to thank you for informing me of the encouraging news that I have won the first prize in the English composition organized by your newspaper．
I'm excited to know that I can participate in the English summer camp in August this year．It's a great opportunity for me to join in such an instructive activity．Undoubtedly，I'd like to be a member of the group．Would you please tell me more information about the camp？When will the camp begin？How much will it cost？What do I need to prepare for it？
I'm looking forward to your early reply．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤：1． 认真审题，找准提示语中的关键词或句，确定中心思想．2． 依据关键句，草拟提纲，梳理文章的脉络3． 准确定位人称、时态．注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．4．最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一：
I am writing to thank you for informing me of the encouraging news that I have won the first prize in the English composition organized by your newspaper
我想谢谢你告诉我这个振奋人心的消息，我在你们报社举办的英语作文获得一等奖．
高分句型二：
It's a great opportunity for me to join in such an instructive activity．
这是我参加这样一个有意义的活动的一个很好的机会．

解答 Dear Mr．Wang，
My name is Li Hua．I am writing to thank you for informing me of the encouraging news that I have won the first prize in the English composition organized by your newspaper（高分句型一）．
I'm excited to know that I can participate in the English summer camp in August this year．It's a great opportunity for me to join in such an instructive activity（高分句型二）．Undoubtedly，I'd like to be a member of the group．Would you please tell me more information about the camp？When will the camp begin？How much will it cost？What do I need to prepare for it？
I'm looking forward to your early reply．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua

点评 开放性作文给出一定的写作主题，并此为基础进行思维和联想，自由发挥．不仅考查学生在内容、结构安排、语言运用和组织方面的能力，而且对学生的想像力、发散思维、归纳判断能力也有很高的要求．