Question

假定你是李华，你的一位美国朋友Jane在北京学习中文两年，即将回国。现在由你给她发E-mail，邀请她参加为她举办的欢送会，要点如下：

(1)祝贺 她顺利通过考试，她的学习进步很大，为她骄傲;  (2)感谢她帮助你们学习英语;

(3)时间：星期六晚六点;  (4)地点：阳光俱乐部(The Sun Club)302房间;

(5)路线：在她所住宾馆门口乘坐332路公共汽车可直达。

注意：  (1)须包括以上主要内容，可以适当增加细节，使内容连贯;

(2)词数：120 ---- 150。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

(3)参考词汇：欢送会 farewell party

Dear Jane,

Congratulations on your passing all the exams.________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________

                                                                 Yours Sincerely,

　                                                               Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

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Dear Jane,

    Congratulations on your passing all the exams. I am delighted that you have made great progress in the two years of your studying Chinese in Beijing. There is no doubt that all you have gained is the result of your hard work. We are proud of you. And thank you very much for your help with our English. Without your help, we wouldn’t have found English easy and interesting to learn. The wonderful time which we spent together will never be forgotten.

    So a farewell party for you has been prepared before you leave for the US. It will be held in Room 302 in the Sun Club this Saturday evening. I wonder if you could come by 6:00 p.m. By the way, you may take Bus No.332 in front of your hotel and i t will take you directly to the club.

    Our friends and I would appreciate it if you could come to the party. Looking forward to your early reply.

                                                                    Yours faithfully,

                                                                         Li Hua

【解析】：本文是邀请Jane参加为她而办的欢送会。时态上现在时为主，写作时一定要注意 不要遗漏文章的要点。要使用合适的连接词，让文章成为一个整体。也要使用一些高级句型如There is no doubt that…；可以给文章增色很多。同时选择一些高级的词汇词组，如appreciate等。