Question

【题目】假如你是某中学高三学生李华，刚刚收到美国笔友Sarah发来的一封电子邮件，请你用英语给她回复一封邮件，具体内容包括：

1. 学习科目、作息时间；

2. 课余活动（运动、阅读、上网）;

3. 理想大学及选择的原因。

注意：1. 词数：120词左右；头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。

2. 可以适当添加细节，以使行文连贯。

3. 开头语和结束语以为你写好。

Dear Sarah,

I’m very glad to receive your last e-mail. At your request, I’d like to tell you something about my school life.

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Best regards,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Sarah,

I’m very glad to receive your last e-mail. At your request, I’d like to tell you something about my school life.

This year I am Senior 3, and I have six subjects to learn every day. School hours usually begin at 7 am and end at 8:30 pm. We are making the most of every minute, preparing for the coming college entrance examination. Though time is precious, I try to do some sports or do some reading after class. Sometimes, too, I surf the Internet to update and amuse myself.

It’s been my dream to go to Peking University ever since I went to senior high school because of its strong cultural atmosphere as well as its high academic status.

I’d appreciate it if you can tell me something about your school life as well. I’m looking forward to it.

Best regards,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：考查应用文中的书信的写作。请你以李华的名义给你的一位美国笔友Sarah写一封回信，介绍一下目前的学习情况以及理想的大学。本篇习作要点都已经给出，书信类短文的关键在于要点要全面包括，不能有遗漏和省略。但是要点只是提纲，考生还要在此基础上增加细节，不要逐字逐句翻译，同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。除此之外，还要用适当的连接词把句子连接起来，这样文章会显得更连贯。

【亮点说明】本篇文章要点齐全、结构合理、条理清晰。使用了多种句式，如状语从句：It’s been my dream to go to Peking University ever since I went to senior high school以及宾语从句：I’d appreciate it if you can tell me something about your school life as well.。还使用了许多短语如：make the most of every minute、prepare for、update and amuse myself、strong cultural atmosphere等等。