Question

18．假如你是李华，今年春节去美国旅游度假一周．你的美国朋友Luke招待了你． 请给他写一封信，表示感谢．要点如下：
1玩得很开心；
2谢谢他的招待；
3邀请其来中国旅游．
注意：1词数100左右；
2可以适当增加细节，以使行文流畅．
Dear Luke，
How are you doing these days？With the deepest gratitude，I am writing to you to express my thanks for your hospitality when I was traveling in America．You know how hard it is for a foreigner to travel in a foreign country alone．（高分句型一）I couldn't imagine what my vacation would be without your help．（高分句型二）I enjoyed myself very much．I will be glad if you can come to China to visit me．I hope we can still keep in touch with each other!I will forever remember the valued time with you．Thank you again and wish everything goes well．
Your sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息年春节去美国旅游度假一周．你的美国朋友Luke招待了你． 请给他写一封信，表示感谢，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：玩得很开心；谢谢他的招待；邀请其来中国旅游．2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：express my thanks for因为…表达感谢；without your help没有你的帮助；enjoy myself 过得非常愉快；keep in touch with保持联系；You know how hard it is for a foreigner to travel in a foreign country alone．（高分句型一）
I couldn't imagine what my vacation would be without your help．（高分句型二）

解答 Dear Luke，
      How are you doing these days？With the deepest gratitude，I am writing to you to express my thanks for your hospitality when I was traveling in America．You know how hard it is for a foreigner to travel in a foreign country alone．（高分句型一）I couldn't imagine what my vacation would be without your help．（高分句型二）I enjoyed myself very much．I will be glad if you can come to China to visit me．I hope we can still keep in touch with each other!I will forever remember the valued time with you．Thank you again and wish everything goes well．
                                                                                                                                                                                                                   Your sincerely，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                     Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．