Question

【题目】假设你是李华，昨天看到央视关于世界濒危珍稀动物的报道后深有感触，决定给世界动物保护基金会（WWF）负责人写一封邮件，邮件的内容包括：

1. 你看完报道的感受；

2. 动物濒危的原因；

3. 你对WWF的建议。

注意：1. 词数100左右。

2. 可适当增加细节，使得行文连贯。

3. 参考词汇：deforestation 砍伐森林

Dear Sir or Madam,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Sir or Madam，

I am writing to tell you how I feel after seeing a programme on CCTV about endangered animals in the world. Looking at the alarming situation the endangered animals are facing, I am deeply worried that they will soon die out if measures aren’t taken to protect them. It is surprising that these animals’ death mainly results from humans’ careless behavior, including serious pollution and deforestation. So what we should do is to stop polluting and destroying animals’ habitats.

To do this, I hope WWF can call on people to donate their money to protect these endangered animals and try to raise people’s awareness of protecting animals. Only by taking necessary measures can we save and protect these rare animals.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：假设你是李华，昨天看到央视关于世界濒危珍稀动物的报道后深有感触，决定给世界动物保护基金会（WWF）负责人写一封邮件，邮件的内容包括：1. 你看完报道的感受；2. 动物濒危的原因；3. 你对WWF的建议。写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。注意：1. 词数100左右。2. 可适当增加细节，使得行文连贯。3. 参考词汇：deforestation 砍伐森林

【亮点说明】本文内容齐全，结构严谨，层次分明，布局合理，语言精练，同时运用高级句子。宾语从句的使用I am writing to tell you how I feel after seeing a programme on CCTV about endangered animals in the world.现在分词的使用Looking at the alarming situation the endangered animals are facing, I……形式主语的使用It is surprising that these animals’ death mainly results from humans’ careless behavior, including serious pollution and deforestation.倒装句的使用Only by taking necessary measures can we save and protect these rare animals.