Question

随着信息技术的快速发展，网络语言以其快捷的传播方式进入了人们的生活。根据某机构最近对某市中学生的调查，发现中学生对网络语言的使用看法不一，结果如下：

支持者	网络语言是信息时代发展的产物，是草根文化的新形式； 易懂，易学，使用快捷方便； 网络语言很酷很有趣，丰富了校园文化生活，缓解了学习压力。
反对者	有些网络语言粗鲁，庸俗； 汉语言是传统文化的基础，过多地使用网络语言会使下一代逐渐淡忘传统文化；
你的观点	（不少于两点）

请给21世纪英语报写一篇题为Is cyber language dangerous？的报道，陈述以上的调查结果并发表你自己的看法。

注意：1. 不要逐条翻译，可适当发挥；

2. 词数150字左右；开头已写好，不计入总词数；

3. 参考词汇： 草根文化 grass-roots culture; 庸俗 vulgar

Is cyber language dangerous ？

With the development of information technology, cyber language has stepped into our life and is spreading rapidly. According to a survey recently conducted among high school students, there are various views about the use of cyber language.

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Answer 1

One possible version：

Is cyber language dangerous ？

With the development of information technology, cyber language has stepped into our life and is spreading rapidly. According to a survey recently conducted among high school students, there are various views about the use of cyber language.

The supporters think cyber language is a product of the information age, which can be regarded as a new form of grass-roots culture. They also think cyber language words are easy to learn or understand, so they are convenient to use. Besides, cyber language can not only enrich their school life but also ease the pressure of studying because many words used online are fun and cool.

However, many students reject the use of cyber language. Firstly, cyber language words are rude and vulgar. Secondly, the Chinese language is the foundation of our great culture. Overusing cyber language will cause young people to gradually forget our traditional culture.

In my opinion , it is dangerous to use too much cyber language, for it may well do great harm to our mother tongue. As the foundation of the traditional culture, the Chinese language is the standard language. We teenagers should learn it well and at the same time go all out to hand down our fine traditional culture.

【解析】

试题分析：本文是一篇表述观点看法的作文，文章的要点基本给出，但是需要考生根据要点进行拓展发挥，而且不能有遗漏。根据提示信息可知文章应该包括三个方面内容，一是赞同的观点；二是反对的看法；三是表明自己的态度。在时态选择上应使用第一人称，而且要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，如强调句，倒装句等，让文章更上档次。同时要注意使用合适的连接词来增加语言的连贯性，如：First，second， Besides, What’s more等。

【亮点说明】本文层次清晰，结构分明，分别用三个自然段来表述三个要点。在文中作者使用了高级词汇和多种句式结构，如定语从句which can be regarded as a new form of grass-roots culture，并列句They also think cyber language words are easy to learn or understand, so they are convenient to use和for it may well do great harm to our mother tongue.，增加了文章的亮点。此外，连接词的准确使用也是一大特色，如表述递进关系的besides，表示转折关系的however，以及表示顺序的firstly，secondly等。

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