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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜钱（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

My birthday is coming. Father asked me how I would want as my birthday present. I told him I need no present but a party. Father said Ok. When I recited the name of my seven friends I planned to invite, he wondered why his guest list didn’t include my new neighbor Tom. I told him about I didn’t like to be with a person whom I didn’t know well. And father insisted that I seize the chance to make new friends. In my birthday, Tom came besides my seven friends. Very quick we became good friends. From this I realized give others a chance means giving myself a chance. It was really unforgettable birthday.

 

【答案】

 how改成what

 need改成needed

 name改成names

 his改成 my

 去掉about

 And改成But

 In改成On

 quick改成qucikly

 give改成 giving

 With后面加a

【解析】

试题分析：

 因为宾语从句缺少宾语，所以how 改成what

 主句是用told从句也用过去时needed

 因为有7个朋友：name 改成names

 my代指作者的

 tell sb+从句，去掉about

 作者说不想和不熟悉的人一起，爸爸坚持要他抓住机会交新朋友，两句话是转折关系And 改成But

 在某一天用on，In 改成On

 用副词修饰动词：became，quick 改成qucikly

 考查词组：mean doing意味做做,give改成 giving

 a unforgettable birthday 一个难忘的生日。

考点：考查短文改错

点评：考查考生在上下文中运用语法的能力，所以先通读全文，在逐句排查错误，对于时态形容词副词和名词单复数的考查是重点。

 

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增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(/\)，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。

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注意：

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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（）,并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

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增加： 在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

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　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

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