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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

My old classroom was interesting because three side of the classroom were made from glass. I enjoyed sit close to the windows and looking at the view. On the left-hand side of the class, I could easy see the football field. In the mornings, it was full of students exercising. The view from the back of the classroom is also splendid. Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around them. Farther in the distance, I could not enjoy the view of snowy mountains. On the right side of the class was the road. I was always interested to see the drivers in hurry in the morning. The position of the classroom with its view made me felt like I was dreaming. If I was only a child when I studied in that classroom, I will never forget it.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】side→sides

【2】from→of

【3】sit→sitting

【4】easy→easily

【5】is→was

【6】them→it

【7】not去掉

【8】hurry前加a

【9】felt→feel

【10】If→Although/Though

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇介绍教室的文章。

【1】side→sides 名词单复数误用。side是可数名词，前面有three修饰，故side要改为sides。

【2】from→of 介词误用。be made from由……制成，看不出原材料；be made of由……制成/组成，看得出原材料，玻璃是可以看出来的，故把from要改为of。比如The chair is made of wood.椅子是由木头做成的。而make from的原材料是看不到的，比如Paper is made from the trees.纸张是由木材做成的。木材变纸张是一种化学变化，从纸上是看不出一棵树的。

【3】sit→sitting 动词形式错误。enjoy后用v-ing形式。

【4】easy→easily 词性错误。此处用副词修饰动词see，故easy改为easily。

【5】is→was 时态错误。全文用的都是过去时，所以要把is改为was。

【6】them→it 代词误用。此处指代前面提到的park，用单数，故要把them改为it。

【7】not去掉 从句意判断：从远处能欣赏到雪山美景。故把not删掉。

【8】hurry前加a 考查固定短语。in a hurry急忙。

【9】felt→feel 词形错误。make sb．do sth．使某人做某事，所以felt要改为feel。

【10】If→Although/Though 连词误用。根据上下文逻辑关系，应译成：尽管那个时候我只是个在教室里学习的小孩，但我永远不会忘记的。表示“让步”，而不是“条件”，而且翻译为“如果”上也不通。故把If→Although/Though。

【知识拓展】

含a的固定短语或习惯用法

have a rest 休息一会儿；have a good time 玩得开心；have a break休息一会儿； in a hurry 匆忙；after a while过了一会儿； once in a while 偶尔；have a good idea 有一个好主意；as a matter of fact事实上； in a word总而言之； make a choice 做出选择；a success一个成功的人，一件成功的事； a failure一个失败的人，一件失败的事； an honour一个荣幸的人，一个荣幸的事； have a good knowledge of 有某方面的好知识。