Question

20．假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历（resume）．给外教Mr Jenkins 写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式（format）
注意：
     1．词数100左右；
     2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．

Answer 1

分析 根据题目要求可以知道是写一封求助信--请求外教帮忙修改材料．写作时需注意格式为书信．人称主要为第一人称和第二人称．时态主要为一般现在时．写作要点是--1，问好；2，说明写信的原因，提出请求；3，说明回信时间；4，表达感谢．
重点词汇及短语：
personal resume 个人简历
job application 工作申请书
part-time job兼职
social practice 社会实践
format 格式
semester/term 学期
a company for international trading 国际贸易公司/外贸公司
consider…as…把…认为是/当作…
apply for a position 申请职位
be familiar with 熟悉某事
intend to do sth 策划/想做某事
look forward to…期待某事
best regards 最好的祝福，诚挚的问候，致敬
高分句型：
句型一：
In this way，we never consider learning as a difficult task．通过这种方式，我们从不觉得学习是件难事．
句型二：
As①it is getting close to the end of the semester and we need to find a part-time job for social practice，I intend to②apply one position in a company for international trading．
as引导的原因状语从句，表示附带说明的"双方已知的原因"，语气比since弱，较为正式，位置较为灵活（常放于主句之前）．intend to…意图做…
句型三：
So can you do me a favor ①to correct the mistakes of the words and format in these materials attached②in the e-mail？
do sb a favor帮助某人，本句表示寻求帮助
attached为过去分词作后置定语，表示被动，是指材料"被附加在邮件"上，主语为the material．

解答 Dear Mr Jenkins，
   Here is Li Hua．First of all，please accept my sincere appreciation for bringing us so many wonderful classes which I really enjoy during this semester．You are such an excellent teacher who always managed to make us learn from fun．In this way，we never consider learning as a difficult task．【高分句型一】（问好）Secondly，I want to ask you for help．As it is getting close to the end of the semester and we need to find a part-time job for social practise，I intend to apply one position in a company for international trading．【高分句型二】It is the first time for me to apply for a job，I am not quite familiar with the format of the resume and the job application which I have prepared．So can you do me a favor to correct the mistakes of the words and format in these materials attached in the e-mail？【高分句型三】I will be very grateful for your help．Millions of thanks．（说明写信原因）
   I am looking forward to your reply．Please reply me before the date of 11th，October．（表达感谢）
Best regards，
Li Hua

点评 考生在写作时需明确写作要点，注意写作中人称和时态的使用，做到思路清晰，句式灵活，表达流畅．考生在平时应多注意常考的作文形式，积累相关的短语和词汇．