Question

短文改错

This afternoon I went to see my grandfather by a bus. It was very

crowded and I had to stand. Besides me there was a woman held a little boy

in her arms. In front of her, a young man occupies two seats, pretending to be

sleeping. I heard the little boy curious asking his mother, “What’s wrong with

the uncle?” I had thought if perhaps the woman would blame the man.

Beyond her expectations, the woman answered with a smile, “Be quiet. This

uncle must very tired because of hard work.” The young man must have

heard the word. His face turned red and offered one seat for the woman at once.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 去掉a

 Besides改为Beside

 held改为holding

 occupies改为occupied

 curious改为curiously

 if改为that或者去掉if

 her改为my

 must后面加be

 word改为words

 for改为to

【解析】

试题分析：

 去掉a  固定搭配by bus坐公交车。

 Besides改为Beside 这里的beside是介词“在…旁边”；在我的旁边是一个抱着孩子的妇女。

 held改为holding 本句指的动词hold与前面的名词a woman构成主动关系，故使用现在分词短语在句中作定语修饰名词a woman，指抱着孩子的那个妇女。

 occupies改为occupied 本文讲述的是过去发生的事情，故使用一般过去时occupied。

 curious改为curiously  只有副词curiously修饰动词asking his mother好奇地问她的妈妈。

 if改为that或者去掉if 动词think后面的宾语从句可以用that修饰，that在句中不充当任何成分，可以省略。

 her改为my 根据句意：超出我的预料，是指我没有预料到，而不是她。

 must后面加be 本句使用的是“must+动词原形”对现在的情况进行的推测，must be tired一定很累了。

 word改为words 用复数形式words表示所说的话。

 for改为to 固定搭配offer sth to sb 向某人提供某物。

考点：考查学生在上下文语境中对词汇语法的掌握情况

点评：本题考查较为细致，要求考生要特别耐心答题中注意句子中人称和数是否一致，时态是否一致。各种词性之间的区别以及一些常用句型，固定短语的应用。一般的这类题型不会出现太复杂的单词和句子，这类题型考察基础知识较多。平时应注重积累，熟记一些句型及惯用结构。修改前先细读短文，标出出错的位置，改完以后还得细读短文，看看改过后的短文是否语意通顺，符合逻辑。