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8．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下短文．短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
There are four seasons in a year and each is unique．However，autumn is the one I like best．Below are the reason why I have a preference for them
It seems to me what autumn is the most grand and impressive season in a year．First of all，neither can I suffer summer's heat，or can I go through winter's coldness at this time．In addition，it is general acknowledged that autumn is symbol of harvest．The smile from farmers，who are getting a good harvest，always making me happy．What is the most important is that autumn also see leaves of bushes and trees to turn red，gold or orange．What a colorful world it is!
That's why I like autumn better．

分析 本文主要介绍作者最喜欢秋天的原因．首先，秋天不热也不冷；其次，秋天是收获的季节；还有，秋天能见证树叶颜色的变化．

解答 There are four seasons in a year and each is unique．However，autumn is the one I like best．Below are the reason why I have a preference for them
It seems to me what autumn is the most grand and impressive season in a year．First of all，neither can I suffer summer's heat，or can I go through winter's coldness at this time．In addition，it is general acknowledged that autumn is∧symbol of harvest．The smile from farmers，who are getting a good harvest，always making me happy．What is the most important is that autumn also see leaves of bushes and trees to turn red，gold or orange．What a colorful world it is!
That's why I like autumn better．
详解：
1．reason改为reasons 考查名词复数．根据句中谓语动词are是复数，主语reason也应用复数形式．
2．them改为it 考查代词．it指代autumn．
3．what改为that 考查连词．主语从句autumn is the most grand and impressive season in a year是完整的，要用连词that引导．
4．or改为nor 考查固定搭配．neither…nor…意为"既不…也不…"，其含义是否定的，可连接任意两个并列的成份．
5．general改为generally 考查副词．acknowledge是动词，要用副词修饰．
6．加a 考查冠词．symbol是可数名词，单数形式前加不定冠词a表示泛指．
7．making改为makes 考查句子结构．分析句子结构，句中缺少谓语动词，make应是谓语动词，因主语smile是单数形式，谓语动词用单数三人称形式makes．
8．see改为sees 考查主谓一致．主语autumn是单数形式，谓语动词也应用单数形式sees．
9．去掉to 考查动词不定式．see后接不带to的动词不定式作宾语补足语．
10．better改为best 考查副词比较级．根据句意：这就是我为什么最喜欢秋天．用副词最高级best．

点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文，短文故事，书信等，具有很强的实用性．短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际，从表面上看类似一篇学生习作．首先，通读全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑，在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好，再进行逐句改错．其次，要进行逐个句子的改错．这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意．最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍，检查答案是否正确，感觉是否还有不妥之处，最终形成定稿．

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