Question

假设你是王阳，你的网友李明给你发来电子邮件，告诉你今年寒假他要去国外旅行，想让你给他一些有关国外旅行的建议。请根据下面的提示给他回一封电子邮件。
1. 建议：
事先了解该国语言、历史、文化及风俗习惯；
保管好身份证、护照、钱及其他贵重物品；
遵守当地法律，尊重当地风俗习惯；
遇到麻烦，向警察或中国大使馆求助。
2. 祝李明旅途愉快。
【写作要求】
词数100左右；
开头已给出，不计入总词数；
参考词汇：大使馆embassy
Dear Li Ming,
I’m very glad to know that you will travel abroad to spend your winter vacation. I’d like to give you tips that will help you travel safely and happily…
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Sincerely,
Wang Yang

Answer 1

Dear Li Ming,
    I’m very glad to know that you will travel abroad to spend your winter vacation. I’d like to give you tips that will help you travel safely and happily…
First of all, in order to enjoy your trip, you should learn about the language, history, culture and customs of the countries to which you are traveling. Second, when traveling, keep an eye on the things you take, such as your ID card, passport, money and other valuable things. In addition, different countries may have different law and customs, and you must obey local laws and customs. Finally, if you are in trouble, don’t hesitate to ask a policeman or go to the Chinese embassy.
Have a good journey!
Sincerely,
  
                                           Wang Yang

解析试题分析：本文是写一封建议信。第一部分：说明写信的目的：给他一些有关国外旅行的建议。第二部分：介绍详情，提出建议。分为四点：1.了解风俗习惯2.保管好贵重物品3.遵守当地法律，习俗4.遇到麻烦求助。第三部分：提出希望采纳建议盼望回复。
考点：考查应用文的写作。
点评：建议信结构： 第一部分：说明写信的目的。 套语如：来信收到，得知你今年寒假他要去国外旅行，我建议…… I’m very glad to know that you will travel abroad to spend your winter vacation. I recommend that…/I’d like to give you tips that will help you travel safely and happily…第二部分：介绍详情，提出建议。套语如： 我建议…… I’d like to suggest that … ；May I suggest that…； In my opinion …； I would like to make a recommendation that … ；I am writing to advise you of …；If I were you, I would …； 第三部分：提出希望采纳建议盼望回复。套语如：请仔细考虑我的建议，谢谢。 Please take good consideration of my advice. Thanks.