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19．第一节 短文改错
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
    Lang Ping，the head coach of China's national women's volleyball team，arrived at my high school in Sep 17．At about 9 o'clock，all the Senior 3 student gathered in the school stadium，waiting for the arrival of Lang Ping and her team．The moment Lang stepped into the stadium，nobody could stay seating．We clapped wild as we saw the schoolmaster take Lang to his seat．Then Lang shares her life with us in her speech．She said it was faith and courage had led her to her success．
    As the Senior 3 student，I think it was not only a fortunate experience for me，but also a powerful one，as Lang's words gave me strength．I will keep it in mind what she told us：Trusting yourself and fight every step of the way to win!

分析 本文主要介绍中国女排教练郎平到学校给高三学生作演讲．并鼓励他们：相信自己，战斗获胜的每一步．

解答 Lang Ping，the head coach of China's national women's volleyball team，arrived at my high school in Sep 17．At about 9 o'clock，all the Senior 3 student gathered in the school stadium，waiting for the arrival of Lang Ping and her team．The moment Lang stepped into the stadium，nobody could stay seating．We clapped wild as we saw the schoolmaster take Lang to his seat．Then Lang shares her life with us in her speech．She said it was faith and courage∧had led her to her success．
    As the Senior 3 student，I think it was not only a fortunate experience for me，but also a powerful one，as Lang's words gave me strength．I will keep it in mind what she told us：Trusting yourself and fight every step of the way to win!
详解：
1．in改为on 考查介词．表示具体的一天要用介词on．
2．student改为students 考查名词复数．student是可数名词，其前有all修饰时要用复数形式．
3．seating改为seated seat是及物动词，其意为"给某人座位，让人坐"，句式：sb．be seated 或 seat sb/oneself．此处stay seated相当于be seated．
4．wild改为wildly 考查副词．clap是动词，要用副词修饰．     
5．his改为her 考查代词．her指代Lang Ping．  
6．shares改为shared 考查动词时态．全文讲述的是已发生的事情，要用一般过去时态．
7．加that 考查强调句．英语强调句型：It is/was+被强调部分（通常是主语、宾语或状语）+that/who（当强调主语且主语指人）+其他部分．       
8．the改为a 考查冠词．student是可数名词，其前加不定冠词a表示泛指．
9．去掉it 考查固定搭配．keep in mind意为"记住"，是固定搭配．
10．trusting改为trust 考查祈使句．and是并列连词，它前后连接两个相同的语法成分，trust和fight是并列谓语，因是祈使句，要用动词原形．

点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文，短文故事，书信等，具有很强的实用性．短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际，从表面上看类似一篇学生习作．首先，通读全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑，在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好，再进行逐句改错．其次，要进行逐个句子的改错．这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意．最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍，检查答案是否正确，感觉是否还有不妥之处，最终形成定稿．

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D．was published by the British Medical Journal
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42．A．set asideB．made upC．resulted inD．took off
43．A．uncertainB．brightC．unimportantD．clear
44．A．ifB．orC．soD．but
45．A．destroyedB．improvedC．ruinedD．affected
46．A．RespectB．AcceptC．ExpectD．Collect
47．A．consideredB．choseC．happenedD．pretended
48．A．pureB．rareC．badD．good
49．A．thereforeB．insteadC．anywayD．however
50．A．differenceB．decisionC．effortD．use
51．A．attendB．turnC．admitD．return
52．A．timeB．moneyC．riskD．courage
53．A．putB．sentC．heldD．given
54．A．scoreB．arriveC．achieveD．discover
55．A．studentB．teacherC．managerD．doctor
56．A．whicheverB．whoeverC．howeverD．whatever
57．A．newB．dailyC．futureD．past
58．A．care forB．call forC．stand forD．look at
59．A．normalB．positiveC．confidentD．unsure
60．A．changeB．experienceC．futureD．education
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One day Merlin received an invitation to go to an important party．He was very pleased and a little excited．As the day of the party came near，Merlin began to think．He wanted to find a way to make a wonderful entrance at the party．Merlin had an idea．He thought that he would attract a lot of attention if he could skate into the room．
Merlin tried different ways to make himself roll．Finally，he decided to put two wheels under each shoe．These were the first roller skate shoes．Merlin was very proud of them．He dreamed of arriving at the party and skating into the room while playing the violin．He was sure that everyone would be very surprised．
On the night of the party Merlin rolled into the room，playing his violin．Everyone was really surprised to see him．There was just one problem．Merlin had no way to stop his roller skating．He rolled on，playing the violin．Then，with all eyes on him，Merlin hit into a huge mirror on the wall．The mirror broke into many pieces with a very loud noise．But nobody forgot Merlin's wonderful entrance after that．
66．The story tells us that people began to enjoy roller-skatingC．
A．before the year 1750                
B．before the invitation
C．because of Joseph Merlin            
D．because it was dangerous
67．People called Merlin a dreamer becauseB．
A．he slept and dreamed a lot          
B．he was full of different ideas
C．he was a talented violinist         
D．he always made people's dreams come true
68．Dmade Merlin think of skating on wheels．
A．Merlin's work  
B．Merlin's violin    
C．A huge mirror       
D．An important party
69．What was Merlin's problem after he rolled into the room？A
A．He couldn't stop his roller-skating．
B．He couldn't attract a lot of attention．
C．Everyone was surprised at him．
D．He couldn't play the violin while rolling．
70．The text is mainly aboutC．
A．a strange man                       
B．an unusual party        
C．how roller skating began            
D．how people enjoyed themselves in the 18th century．

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