Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加: 在此处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出修改的词。

删除: 把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改: 在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。

注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。

My father took me out camping for the first time when I was seven. He wanted teach me about animals, insects and trees. My uncles all come along with bows and arrows for hunting.

One evening at sunset, we sat by the fire, have our barbecue. Just then a bird was flying over us. My uncles immediate jumped up and shot their arrows on the bird. Neither of the arrows hit the target. Suddenly the arrows was flying down at us from the sky — they were looked like rain! We ran to escape but fortunately no one was injured.

That day I didn’t learn much about animals, insects or trees, but I learnt a impressive lesson about gravity!

 

Answer 1

1.wanted后面加to

2.come改为came

3.have改为having

4.immediate改为immediately

5.on改为at

6.Neither改为none

7.was改为were

8.去掉were或者looked

9.but改为and

10.a改为an

【解析】

试题分析：本文讲述了在作者七岁那年，父亲和叔叔们带他去打猎的经历。

1. 考查非谓语动词。want to do sth，固定搭配，故把wanted后面加to。

2. 考查时态。文章在描述过去发生的事，故把come改为came。

3. 考查非谓语动词。此处have并不是句子的谓语，而是表伴随状语，应该用have改为having。

4. 考查副词。修饰动词短语jumped up，用副词。故把immediate改为immediately。

5. 考查介词。shoot at 朝...射击，固定搭配，故把on改为at。

6. 考查代词。O否定两者用neither，否定三者及以上，用none，根据语境，用none。

7. 考查系动词。主语the arrows，是可数名词复数形式。故把was改为were。

8. 考查语态。此处表示“看起来像。。。”不用被动语态，故把去掉were或者looked。

9. 考查连词。根据语境，此处是顺接，故把but改为and。

10. 考查冠词。Impressive第一个音节是元音，故a改为an。

考点：考查短文改错