Question

It was so a sunny day that I decided to go fishing. I went      1.    

out early and sit on the bank of the river. I hoped that I would  2.    

have a good harvest. A long time passed. Although I waited    3.    

patiently, but there was no luck. When the sun was about to set, 4.    

I caught nothing , it made me very disappointed. I walked      5.   

home sadly with the fishing pole or the empty basket. I was   6.   

sure that my mother would laugh at me. Passed a fish market,  7.   

I suddenly had an idea. I bought two big fresh fish and brought  8.  

them home. My mother would certainly happy when she saw   9.  

the fish and she would encourage me to continue to fishing.     10.  

Answer 1

1. so 改为such

2. sit 改为sat

3. 正确

4. 去掉but

5. it 改为which

6. or 改为and

7. Passed 改为 Passing

8. fish 改为fishes

9.  happy 前面加be

10. 去掉to 或 fishing 改为fish

解析:

1. 因为后面所修饰的是名词day

2. and连接的并列成分应该是一致的

3. 正确

4. although 和but不应同时运用

5. 这里应该是非限制性定语从句

6. 并列关系

7. 作伴随状语

8. 这里fish是可数名词，不是“鱼肉”的含义

9. 缺少be动词

10. continue to do 或 continue doing“继续做某事”