题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华,你校英语俱乐部最近将开展主题为“Learning English from films”的活动。请你以短文形式为倶乐部将要举行的首场活动写一份书面通知,要点如下:
时间:月9号晚7点—10点
地点:学校大礼堂
活动内容:欣赏电影《阿甘正传》( Forrest Gump),分享观影感受
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Notice
In order to help students learn English better, we will hold a series of film presentations. At the beginning of our “Learning English from films” campaign, a world-famous English film named Forrest Gump will be shown in our school hall. After watching the film, some people will be invited to share their opinions on it. The whole activity will last three hours from seven to ten on the evening of 9thf June. All teachers and students are welcome to join us. If you are interested, please arrive on time. Be sure not to make any noises or eat snacks during the film.
Have a good time!
【解析】这是一篇提纲类作文写作。需要注意以下要点。
(1) 仔细审题。明确写作要求,抓住写作要点。
(2) 拟写草稿。在审题的基础上,拟写草稿,注意对关键要点覆盖全面的同时还要注意内容的丰富。
(3) 运用高级词汇和句子格式。在写作过程中要运用一些高级词汇,还要注意运用一些从句,使得句子不再单一。
【范文亮点】
动名词作状语。After watching the film, some people will be invited to share their opinions on it.
条件状语从句。If you are interested, please arrive on time.
祈使句的使用。Be sure not to make any noises or eat snacks during the film.
In order to的使用。