题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华,遗失了外教Alice借给你的一本书。请给她写封邮件,内容包括:
1. 如何遗失的;
2. 对该书的评价;
3. 补救的方法;
4. 你得到的教训。
注意:
词数100左右;
可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Alice,
I’m terribly sorry to tell you that I have lost the book you were so kind to lend me last week. I like the book very much and I read it every day and intended to finish it next month. Last night when I came to my room, it was nowhere to be found. I will get a new book for you.
Old books are like old friends. Once lost, they can never be replaced. And for this irrecoverable loss, I am to blame. I was so careless with my things. This is a warning to me to be more careful in the future.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【解析】试题分析:本文是一封电子邮件。李华遗失了外教Alice借给的一本书,请给她写封邮件,内容包括:1. 如何遗失的;2. 对该书的评价;3. 补救的方法;4. 你得到的教训。根据所给提纲,列出要点,并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力,灵活运用英语知识,采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来。写作时注意时态、语态的合理运用,主次分明,详略得当,语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展,按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词,适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【亮点说明】
本文是一封电子邮件,格式正确,结构布局合理,语言精练,并使用高级句子。I’m terribly sorry to tell you that I have lost the book you were so kind to lend me last week.宾语从句和定语从句完美结合;Last night when I came to my room, it was nowhere to be found.when引导时间状语从句;Once lost, they can never be replaced.过去分词做条件状语,句中使用含情态动词的被动语态;I am to blame.be to blame运用巧妙。