题目内容
【题目】书面表达
每年都有许多人外出旅游,一些人的不文明行为引起了社会的广泛关注。某英文报社正在举行以“文明旅游”为主题的讨论。假定你是李华,请你给报社写一封信,呼吁大家做文明游客。要点如下:
1. 尊重习俗;
2. 不高声喧哗;
3. 其他
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 开头和结尾语已为你写好,不计入总词数。
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【答案】
Dear Editor,
I’ve read your discussion on how to behave properly while traveling. Every year, a great many holidaymakers go out for sightseeing and relaxation. While they are enjoying themselves, some of them behave rudely, which causes a big concern. How to be a civilized tourist has become a heated topic.
In my opinion, it is necessary to watch our manners. First, we must respect and follow local customs. Besides, we’d better not talk loudly in public places to avoid disturbance to others. Also, be aware that queue jumping is unacceptable in many countries. More importantly, if we travel abroad, we should bear in mind that we are representing our country, so we need to be cautious about how we act. Only in this way can we enjoy our trips and have beautiful memories as well.
【解析】
试题分析:本文是提纲类作文,要点已给出,要适当添加细节使文章内容充实;另外要适当用一些连词让文章更连贯,并使用高级词汇和高级句型提高文章的档次。
【亮点说明】本文是一篇书信,呼吁大家做一名文明游客。语句通顺,内容齐全,有个人观点,并在句中使用高级句子。While they are enjoying themselves, some of them behave rudely, which causes a big concern.状语从句和非限制性定语从句完美结合;How to be a civilized tourist has become a heated topic.疑问代词加动词不定式在句中作主语;if we travel abroad, we should bear in mind that we are representing our country, so we need to be cautious about how we act.并列句中包含着条件状语从句;Only in this way can we enjoy our trips and have beautiful memories as well.部分倒装经典运用;另外;In my opinion, First, Besides, Also, More importantly, as well.的运用为文章增色添彩、
